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TheRainbowlum [2014-01-20 22:20:58 +0000 UTC]

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I love this drawing so much!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="577" title="La la la la"/> So glad you uploaded it! I noticed nobody critiqued this piece yet, so anyways, let's begin xD

I really like how you drew the hair and the overall shape + form of it, and how you drew the lines through it, too. The hand with the scissors is AWESOME, I love how you drew it (please excuse my un-knowledge, but is it supposed to be in that rockstar-type hand gesture that this character usually does? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="93" title="XD"/> If so, then that is awesome, you win a cheeseburger)!

The folds on the clothing are really well drawn, too. So, awesomeness level? OVER NEIN THOUSAAAAAAAAAA-

Yeeeah that joke is really overused. xD

Anyways, it's kind of hard for me to pick out anything I could give advice on/could use improvement, since this piece is so well drawn, but all I can think of is that to me the left forearm looks a bit too long. Possibly the glasses could also be a tiny bit more-

- Stops critiquing suddenly -

Wait...

- Sees dat signature at the bottom right corner -

O_O

HOLYCRAPOMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOOOOOOOSH!!!!!!11!!!!1!!!!one!!!!!!!11!!!eleven!!!!1!!!

THAT IS THE MOST GLORIOUS SIGNATURE IN THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH OMYGOSH OMYGOSH OMYGOOOOOSH!!!!!! a.deviantart.net/avatars/r/a/r… " alt=" " title="RainbowSqueePlz" /> IT'S SO SQUIGGLY AND AWESOME AND OMYGOSH I CAN'T EVEN a.deviantart.net/avatars/a/m/a… " alt=" " title="AmericaHappySpazzPlz" />

AUUUUGH YOU WIN A MILLION DOLLARZ AND FIVE MILLION STARZ AWESOMOOOOOOOMMMMEE a.deviantart.net/avatars/r/a/r… " alt=" " title="RainbowDashPlz" />

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GermanGypsy [2016-05-28 18:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Also, random comment on the critique, that person put America!!

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GermanGypsy [2016-05-28 18:55:03 +0000 UTC]

All you need to do is draw Sebas-Chan X3

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toxicfoxes [2014-03-15 22:56:08 +0000 UTC]

I love how he has his little scissors haha cx

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ccfirstchamp [2014-01-20 23:12:42 +0000 UTC]

SCIIIIIISSOOOOOORS

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Siren-Spoof [2014-01-20 21:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh My Grell! Have you just been watching a whole bunch of anime because ahh this!

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BlushingBoo [2014-01-20 17:00:38 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely! He's so feminine-looking. XD I think he'd enjoy being drawn that way.

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