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foso — The Dream That Screamed
Published: 2010-01-27 19:57:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1581; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 5
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You try to say hi but I don't replyI stare at the sky and you wonder why
It's not you or me or anything
It's just a dream that screamed at me
You may be wondering how that could be
Just look in my eyes and you will see
How angry I can be at everything
That why I hide the monster inside of me
I can smile and I can wave
I'll even be a good boy and behave
But don't even think I'll be a slave
For it is true freedom that I crave
So don't even try to stop me
I wont be what you want me to be
I'll be me as long as I breathe
I'd rather die than live down on my knee
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Comments: 37
Try reading this in a really angry voice, It starts to sound like music.
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Thank you very much! Sorry for the late reply!
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You really nailed it there at the end. Good job.
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Thank you, sorry I didn't thank you for your other comment. Slipped me by.
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I don't think I took it the way you wrote it, but it still hit me. Good job.
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This is amazing, great job, keep writing
1 thing though, on line 8 shouldn't it be "that's why" instead of "that why"? just trying to give a little help sorry if I'm wrong
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I fell in love with that first stanza, especially the last two lines, just the way they fit I guess. Good job. ^-^ This really is a fantastic piece, and in all probability, something most of us can relate to. >.<'
I believe I'd call it a 'dignified anger.'
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Yes, I am a very dignified person with valid assertions to multiple things... XD
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This is really good, I like how it flows 
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MUAHAHAHAHAHA Yes, maniacal laughter is good. anyways, thanks!
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yes, maniacal laughter is always good. Your welcome
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This really shows some genuine feelings, awesome piece!! It makes it more natural too
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Thanks, when you put emotion into your writings I guess people can tell.
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Being the past you was the enslavement, no doubt. I'm sure "you" is best defined as the way you want people to see you, which kinda conflicts with the fact that being this new "you" keeps the people from sticking around due to differences not agonizing reward through their mirror cortex.
Anyways, you don't know what "you" is without being oppressed and seeing the sacrifices, and everyone has to be oppressed by the rules of the system they enter. You just gotta find the friends who bitch about the same sacrifices and try to ameliorate it piece by piece for your ancestors to continue.
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Wow, that was a very educated and thought out explanation and I get lost in thinking about it that way. lol
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Thanks! You should check my other works, rhyming is abound in them. XD
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Wow thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thanks for possibly helping others find it.
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It's a very calm anger but the anger is def. there. I enjoyed it.
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Thanks, its something that I try to go for.
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