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FountainsOfMars β€” Of All The Paper Stars
Published: 2020-06-07 09:18:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 267; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Description I am, thus,
but one
unplanned,
redacted wish
Of all the paper stars
floating above you
in whirlwinds

I will always want you
even if that's
not returned
And I'll still try
to shine on you ~
weathered, wet,
or wind-burnt

Don't believe me?
Then just wait
until your season ends
Be sure to look
above you
As you're drawing
your last breath

What will you see?
You will see me
I'll never relent
Even once
I'm beyond wrinkled,
whithered, ripped,
or bent
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Comments: 18

AnneLGray [2020-06-13 03:33:26 +0000 UTC]

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FountainsOfMars In reply to AnneLGray [2020-06-13 17:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!
I deeply appreciate you taking the time to read my stuff and your responses.
You're very kind.

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FlavorOfWords [2020-06-08 16:30:05 +0000 UTC]

Nice work, sweet with a lot of undertones. I enjoyed the vocabulary. Thanks for sharing.

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FountainsOfMars In reply to FlavorOfWords [2020-06-08 19:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment!
I do appreciate the support.

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Alice-Hutchison [2020-06-08 04:09:40 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful and romantic! It hit my feels so freaking hard! I LOVE IT! ❀️

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FountainsOfMars In reply to Alice-Hutchison [2020-06-08 15:32:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm super pleased!
Thank you so much!
Curious.. are there levels of hard higher than so freaking hard that i should striving for??
πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸ˜…πŸ˜‚

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Alice-Hutchison In reply to FountainsOfMars [2020-06-08 15:35:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you're super pleased.
You're welcome so much 😊.
Well, there's destroyed,murdered, murdered and chopped to bits, and I'm pretty sure that's it (also pretty sure you've accomplished them b4 I don't remember)

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FountainsOfMars In reply to Alice-Hutchison [2020-06-08 15:50:49 +0000 UTC]

Yikes..you make me sound scary and dangerous!
😳
And here I'm just trying to come off sorta charming and slightly creepy..πŸ€”

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Alice-Hutchison In reply to FountainsOfMars [2020-06-08 15:56:42 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, I like my feels murdered and chopped to bits!
πŸ™‚
You do come off sorta charming and well, not creepy (idk)..😊

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FountainsOfMars In reply to Alice-Hutchison [2020-06-08 21:46:07 +0000 UTC]

Not creepy??
πŸ€”
(shhhh..Alice likes my Jason/Hockey mask!!πŸ˜…)

Honestly, though...I'm completely harmlessπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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Alice-Hutchison In reply to FountainsOfMars [2020-06-09 00:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Not creepy..
πŸ™‚
(I do like your Jason/Hockey mask!!)

Cool

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FountainsOfMars In reply to Alice-Hutchison [2020-06-09 16:27:21 +0000 UTC]

What if i told you that sometimes i walk around the house in nothing but that mask, eating peanut butter straight from the jar, while Howard the Duck is repeat playing on the tv....

Would you think i was creepy then?

πŸ€”

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Alice-Hutchison In reply to FountainsOfMars [2020-06-09 16:28:19 +0000 UTC]

Nah, that's just silly

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Roesavlon [2020-06-07 16:36:57 +0000 UTC]

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FountainsOfMars In reply to Roesavlon [2020-06-08 03:15:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
this is actually the second poem I've written about paper stars πŸ˜‚ but i like this one much better than the first one.

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Roesavlon In reply to FountainsOfMars [2020-06-08 03:19:07 +0000 UTC]

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TheWatermelonMoon [2020-06-07 10:09:43 +0000 UTC]

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FountainsOfMars In reply to TheWatermelonMoon [2020-06-07 12:29:36 +0000 UTC]

❀😊

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