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Published: 2014-09-03 19:20:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 4194; Favourites: 94; Downloads: 0
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Jane (the mongoose) and Zawadi (the tigress) are chased by somebody... a villain?
Drawings by FOX-POP
Plot by FOX-POP & werewolfgirl-90
Characters by FOX-POP & werewolfgirl-90
Characters design by FOX-POP
Sonic logo by SEGA®
SURVIVORS logo by FOX-POP
And special thanks to darkspeeds★ for his tips.
(PS. Being italian my english is still not perfect... if you see some error, flag it to me! ;D)
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Comments: 32
Very nice!
How come they always wear minimal clothing when they're in the jungle...
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This is proof that you don't always need shadings to make a drawing look great. It's all in the outlines!!!
So they're chased by what they don't know even is?
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I love the look of this comic! It's like you could find it on a comic book stand!
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hey, now that I notice it, you don´t paint shading to the characters, you just give a color, but that is not bad. I like the result ^-^
The only thing that bothers me a bit is the panel 5 to 6 ... I think it's because we don´t read a page in this way very often
although, you could avoid that confucion, not by the use of these arrows, but by the character kick goes right to the table below
the entire drawing of panel 6 directs the view to 7
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no, I never shade comic pages
shading is too heavy in a comic page, and it would steal the attention from the balloons 
And...yeah, I had some problem with those panels 
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your page look great without shadows completely
and now I grabbed curiosity about using the arrows, I didn´t see them much in comics, but I'll get to reviewing super-hero comics or mangas .3.
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Aaah this looks so much like a professional comic!! 
Everything is just so well drawn, from the characters themselves to the backgrounds!
Hehe lucky Jane is a quick thinker to use her shoelaces 
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eheh thank youuu!
Yeah, Jane is very good on finding solutions to this kind of probs xD
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wow ! this looks so wonderfully made! I absolutly love how you drew this background with the scenery and put the other pictures on it , its giving a better sphere to the whole page and makes it very intresting to look to. As well this perspective and backgrounds look impressive and details , love the poses and expressions so far too 
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Thank you dear!
I think I still have to work a bit on the perspective and the clouds xD but... time to time ^U^
And...who knows what will happen? ;D
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Aha I see , I am sure you will get better with it
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You know what I think of this ^^ I can't wait the next
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I'm always so jealous of how you do your backgrounds. Looks so amazing!
Also, love this page keep up the good work ^^
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Thank you! ;U;
I'm sure you won't regret to see it! ;D
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Wow that's a great comic and the storyline is nice!
Keep it up!
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The comic really looks professional, even though this is just the first real issue. Have you ever considered getting a job with a professional art firm?
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Would you like a little help with the translations of this? The English is very close, but doesn't sound very natural in a comic book.
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WOw this is actually professionally done!!!
However, on the fourth panel, you should have made Zawadi's speech bubble come after Jane's. Because I read Zawadi's first and that was confusing.
Other than that i am actually very impressed by how well done this comic, is!
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ehh I know, it bothers me too
it would have been a bit more tricky, to not consider that it would have covered 3/4 of panel
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Ben fatto e molto professionalmente: Sembra proprio la pagina di uno dei fumetti di Sonic della Archie Comics!^^
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Grazie!!!
Eh si, qua purtroppo mi conviene farlo alla Yardley 'n Herms xD
Poi quando comincerò a fare le cosette mie...giù di scale di grigio
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This is incredibly well done ^^
Really looking forward to seeing more X3
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WOAH this is great! all the panels are super dynamic and full of detail KEEP IT UP
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Thank you! :'D I'm glad you're liking it! ^^
I hope you'll like the future pages and the story
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