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Final PageWarning: Contains soft vore and pre-digestion. If you're offended by such then I'd advise you to turn back.
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Yeah, I guess so. I usually like vore when it's more dark or more nature based, I'm not really into vore when it's all happy or willing.
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Same here
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I don't care for super rainbowbarf happy willing, but I dislike prey fatality's.
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Well that's just me
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You nearly made me cry 
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Well to be honest, I'm not really into happy or willing vore (romantic, playful, protection, etc.).
I usually prefer dark stories that are more nature based when it comes to vore.
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I also prefer dramatic and often sad themes, but the prey always survives in my stories...can read one if you want^^
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Alright.
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aaa, once again, I love how you wrote this whole thing xP.
though, that ending. o,.o
Seriously though, amazing story, well written, nice details, and I feel like you portrayed all the characters awesomely~! Β
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Thank you very much
Yeah, I actually prefer darker stories or RPs when it comes to vore
My only problem with writing that I have to admit I have is that I tend to lack in humor
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a'course! Β I should be the one thanking you xP
I actually do too, Β shhhh >w>
Ah, well some stories don't necessarily call for humor, even in comic relief form o3o, Β especially in shorter stories such as this one~ ^^
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I am REALY Excited, your story was pretty fine, I liked how you end it like this, very sad ending.
What we know from this story "is Colby and Aren will be be the best buddies forever"
you need to share these in many groups to get many readersΒ
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Awwwww, thanks
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Yes, I'm going to submit this to a few groups.
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any time pal
you need to do more stories like these, I like your ideasΒ
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I might write more later ^^
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Yes, Colby is a jackass, but....but.....
MAX!!Β YOU BASTARD!!!Β
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I wouldn't provoke Max if I were you, he can get pretty mad
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Overall, how did you like the story?
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I found it very sad.Β I wanted to rescue both mousies so badly.
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Some constructive criticism:Β When it comes to writing serious stories with vore in it, have it make sense, give it some conflict.Β For instance, the cats in American Tail.Β They contributed rather nicely to the story, even though they were evil sonsa bitches.
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I guess the one element that I tend to lack in writing, regrettably, is humor
I'm kinda like Mr. Spock when it comes to humor, unfortunately. I mean I do have a sense of humor but it pops up at random
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Most of my humor comes in the form of bitter sarcasm and snarkyness.
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And disgruntled preys.Β If they act like it's a mere inconvenience, it can be funny sometimes.Β Like for instance, the times Colby gets nommed by Mike.
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XDDDD
It's always funny when Colby gets nommed, given his reputation
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Truth be told, it wasn't funny in this story.
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Ooh really? ^^
Well is still a nice stomach :3
haha, so is this sort of what you had in mind for my mouse picture? The story along with the image? :3
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Yeah, but I think I'm gonna turn it back into a comic.
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