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THEKIDWITHAKNIFE [2015-12-23 04:06:58 +0000 UTC]
I like your name for the blades. Seven edges of elimination. Very grand.
A good piece of story as well. It could use some polish though, But a nice glimpse into your world.
The blades are interesting as a weapon as well. Always continue to hammer out the complexities of weaponry. A weapons design can grow greatly with ongoing interest.
Β I see much potential in this.
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Foxofwonders In reply to queenofeagles [2015-10-13 15:30:44 +0000 UTC]
Not at all. Almost all stories I write are completely unrelated to the others. My stories are usually a bit like fables, although there isn't always a 'lesson' included (but oftentimes there is).
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queenofeagles In reply to Foxofwonders [2015-10-14 18:51:00 +0000 UTC]
fables are nice! I couldn't help to get the feeling that they were all part of the same universe though... don't know why XD
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Foxofwonders In reply to queenofeagles [2015-10-14 19:02:27 +0000 UTC]
They don't, but I'm sort of curious why it would feel that way. Somehow I can imagine it's not impossible for them to take place in the same world, but I don't really see links between them.
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queenofeagles In reply to Foxofwonders [2015-10-15 16:03:37 +0000 UTC]
I have no idea... it feels like all the characters could come from the same world. All fantasy critters and such, that would do well in a natural setting... Maybe it's also because your stories often tell a lesson, it feels like they belong to each other.
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queenofeagles In reply to Foxofwonders [2015-10-16 16:01:11 +0000 UTC]
That sounds nice! I believe you can use both ways of spelling that (weird...)Β
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Foxofwonders In reply to Greybeard-CG [2015-08-27 19:46:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Ook nooit tegen de richting in gaan draaien, dat werkt niet. xD
Oei, nu je het zegt, haha. Ik vind het wel wat hebben als verhalen beginnen en eindigen met ruwweg dezelfde tekst.
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Foxofwonders In reply to Greybeard-CG [2015-08-27 21:01:23 +0000 UTC]
...nu je het zegt, haha. xD
Lies, Hiccup, lies!
Yeah, kan me er wel wat bij voorstellen dat het clichΓ©gevoelig is.
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silver-lati [2015-08-27 13:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Well, those blades make for a unique fighting style for sure!Β
And that smug face though.
(And I will never mention paper altough I just did. )
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Foxofwonders In reply to silver-lati [2015-08-27 19:49:34 +0000 UTC]
Definitely! They require a lot of spinning though, hopefully the wielder won't get dizzy. xD
(Luckily spirals are also known for their ability not to get dizzy)
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silver-lati In reply to Foxofwonders [2015-08-27 20:28:31 +0000 UTC]
Like it's a perfect fit huh? Still, the design is so cool and even if a bit unusual it fits the dragon type so well~
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Foxofwonders In reply to silver-lati [2015-08-27 20:59:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I'm pretty happy with the design! I can perfectly imagine them wielding blades like this and it would be badass. xD
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