Comments: 15
Pokefan19 [2013-07-15 13:07:57 +0000 UTC]
Didn't she also have cubs with Folayan?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
foxpen In reply to Lil-Cheetah [2013-01-16 17:26:35 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thank-you! : ) I dunno if Rinja will actually use her, though. She was just a spurr-of-the-moment character that planted a seed in my brain and sprouted like a weed. Couldn't get rid of her. : P
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Lil-Cheetah In reply to foxpen [2013-01-16 17:32:01 +0000 UTC]
XD I love the story you made too. As cubs, I imagine that Chomoa would stick up for Dhalilisha, who was bullied by the other cubs - Lubaya especially. I imagine that Chomoa beat the living snot out of Lubaya, and Lubaya never hurt Dhalilisha again. XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
foxpen In reply to Lil-Cheetah [2013-01-16 17:39:23 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha! I never thought about it! Y'know, Chomoa probably -would-. When I wrote Chomoa, I tried to still make Dhalilisha in-character as a low-ranking lioness until she has Pumzika, so Chomoa was her only actual friend and not just another pride sister. That was why she could squeeze in as the 'auntie' to the white cub. Maybe whoever gets to write and design Tahiya's parents will add onto the legacy of Dhalilisha and her generation. XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Lil-Cheetah In reply to foxpen [2013-01-16 17:59:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I see Chomoa as low-ranking as Dhalilisha. But unlike Dhali, who was cripplingly shy, I like to think Chomoa was a bit of a loud-mouth that probably got on everyone's nerves. She probably liked being low-ranking as it meant she could do what she wanted and no one cared all that much!
I also like to think it was Chomoa who saw Pumzika as an opportunity for Dhalilisha to rise in rank, and it was she who alerted the rest of the pride to the white cub's birth. Most likely when Chomoa first went to Vitako she was laughed out the den, but in the end her persistence paid off when a peeved Vitako decided to humour her... and get the shock of his life!
Probably it was Chomoa who encouraged Dhalilisha to accept Vitako's proposal to marry him. In doing so, she helped mould Dhali into a more assertive lioness, as you have hinted in your story and, by extension, in Vitako's bio.
Unfortunately, it was also Chomoa who helped turn Pumzika into a spoilt little snot...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
foxpen In reply to Lil-Cheetah [2013-01-16 21:19:19 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's quite the heroic version of Chomoa. I never considered Chomoa a 'loud mouth' until Vitako pushed her over the edge and she literally started casting stones. I always felt she was above Dhali's rank but, because they grew up together, those rankings were just superficial for the girls, just part of a group hunting plan. Maybe Chomoa as the first to know and spread the news about Pumzika's pelt...maybe she DID see Pumzika as a way for Dhalilisha to rise in rank, and encourage her to marry Vitako. I never thought of that, but...it makes sense. It does. She DOES try and smooth the ruffled feathers when Danisa is betrothed to Takatifu, after all..
Huh. I like that.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Lil-Cheetah In reply to foxpen [2013-01-16 21:40:49 +0000 UTC]
Well I always imagined Chamoa to be more spunky and full of fire. She defends Dhalilisha from bullies as cubs and is the one to convince Dhalilisha to go search for a mate to fulfill her dream of becoming a mother. And with Dhalilisha lacking in confidence to leave the pride on her own, Chamoa accompanies her for moral support, even though she has no interest in cubs herself (until Uttara shows up, that is!). And when Folayan agrees to sire Dhali's cubs, Chamoa is quick to threaten him by ripping off his balls if he dared hurt her friend. ^^
I imagine that Dhalilisha was glad to have a friend like Chamoa, although [i]how[/i] they became friends is a mystery!
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
foxpen In reply to Lil-Cheetah [2013-02-14 20:48:03 +0000 UTC]
Looking back at what you wrote about Dhali's friend in Rinja's posting...yeah. Your vision of Chomoa is attaching itself to me. She -should- be that gutsy loud mouth, confident friend of the same rank. It makes more sense that way; Chomoa having the confidence to actually throw stones at the -king-, that takes balls.
Yah. I like that vision.
Damn you, brain-worm!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
foxpen In reply to Lil-Cheetah [2013-01-16 21:53:04 +0000 UTC]
How they became friends? They were born around the same time, so they chilled as cubs! Chomoa and Dhalilisha, off on another adventure! Chomoa out front, leading the way, Dhalilisha fretting right along behind her! : P
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Rinjapine [2013-01-16 08:23:22 +0000 UTC]
that twas an amazing story!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1