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Description EDIT EDIT OKAY! I FORGOT TO DRAW THE LEDGE! XD WOOOOOOOPS

OKAY NOW THE PAWS DON'T LOOK SO AWKWARD! I KNEW SOMETHING LOOKED OFF!!! XD

EDIT: OKAY so i'm going to do critiques but i don't want any thing unfair like all 5 starts. i'm looking for constructive criticism ;w;


woh i'm actually kinda proud how this turned out!

i'm still trying to work on my art style a bit, i guess drawing people kinda helps hand control a little, idk

but yeah! this is for a video collab to THE BEST SONG EVER THAT NEVER GETS OLD YAAAAAY it's called how far we've come by matchbox 20

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SlimeWolf [2012-07-10 21:17:57 +0000 UTC]

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ALL 5 STARS FOREVARRR

This is amazing, the way you shade, is amazing. And how you made the light shine on Freckles <333 Awwww man. Also, Freckles' facial expressions equally match the quote or lyrics "There's no one on the Corner and there's no one at Home..." AMAZZZIINNNNN Just everything about this is amazing, Freckles <3 And her tail... omg... never could do that, I tail fail every time. XDDDD

But really, her fur shines, and her bandanna does too. Aww man. <333 Her pose is also very unique <3 10 words more?! I can't say anything else but... I LOVE IT!

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Freckled-Kat In reply to SlimeWolf [2012-07-10 22:36:33 +0000 UTC]

thanks a bunch ;w; i don't feel like this is totally fair though... thanks for this so much though :'D

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SlimeWolf In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-10 23:51:45 +0000 UTC]

It is too fair <33333 You're welcome, you deserve it!

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Freckled-Kat In reply to SlimeWolf [2012-07-10 23:56:54 +0000 UTC]

;W; <333

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SlimeWolf In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-11 01:26:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm stalking yew on Skype bro.

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Freckled-Kat In reply to SlimeWolf [2012-07-11 02:06:44 +0000 UTC]

WOH XD

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SlimeWolf In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-11 02:09:49 +0000 UTC]

YUS

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XxSilentSnow [2012-07-10 21:05:27 +0000 UTC]

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WELP HERE WE AH GO! i'm not to good with Critiques or anything i hope i sound fair QAQ.

Alright:

The pose is Original and also somewhat hard (at least to me XD). The legs are amazing and the head and tail too! Also the thing is cat's can pose like that so good job on that! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Even if you didn't draw the light source I bet I could still tell were the light would be coming from! I also love that the other hind leg doesn't show up because from this angle you wouldn't be able to see it!

Now for the fixing part XD
The only thing i see wrong (conserding your going for a sorta cartony thing here) is that you could pull the stomach in just a little bit and extened the tail base.

I hope this long thing helped XD

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Freckled-Kat In reply to XxSilentSnow [2012-07-10 22:40:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks a bunch for this and thanks so much for helping me with the stumach XD i still don't get thoughs things owo; i'll fix it right now ^^

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XxSilentSnow In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-11 03:50:15 +0000 UTC]

cool glad i could help ^^

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MuttPie [2012-07-10 20:21:07 +0000 UTC]

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So you wanted critique.
so you'll get one x3.
This is pretty hard to to critique on, but I will try my best c:.

Things that could be improved
The front paws look a bit weird with how they hang down :3. If you know what I mean, and maybe get a bit more detail on the paw that touches the "One"

Good things
You've got the shading and highlighting really good!
I really like the expression of the eyes, like they look a bit sad/scared but yet really cute!.
and I really love how you've made the text :3 the a bit glow it has c:



SO ALL in all its a really great piece!:3

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Freckled-Kat In reply to MuttPie [2012-07-10 22:42:08 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOSH WOOPS XD I KNEWWWW SOMETHING WAS MISSING!

I FORGOT THE ADD THIS LEDGE IN THERE!! oh my gosh thanks so so so much for reminding me XD i had the layer on invisible! XD


thanks so much for critiquing too ;w;

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MuttPie In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-10 23:15:20 +0000 UTC]

Haha :3 WEll glad for helping I guess x'DD.
You are welcome ;u;
was it fair ?;u;

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Freckled-Kat In reply to MuttPie [2012-07-10 23:20:16 +0000 UTC]

yes it is ^^~

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greyxsilver101 [2012-08-21 23:47:38 +0000 UTC]

OH I LOVE DAT SONG <3

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Freckled-Kat In reply to greyxsilver101 [2012-09-08 15:23:36 +0000 UTC]

YESSSS

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Heather-kat [2012-07-25 17:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Dis ish so epic. .w.


Freckie your art is so amazing it blinds me. +w+

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Freckled-Kat In reply to Heather-kat [2012-07-25 17:51:29 +0000 UTC]

alkfasd DON'T BE BLIND LADKFJASD *heals with gandalf's magics* pashaaa

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Heather-kat In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-25 17:53:02 +0000 UTC]

XD


.w.

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TheStarCitizen [2012-07-13 06:13:31 +0000 UTC]

omg I wanna hug this soo badly sdjkglsgks

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Freckled-Kat In reply to TheStarCitizen [2012-07-13 16:42:02 +0000 UTC]

lololol fluffiesss

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TheStarCitizen In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-13 16:43:50 +0000 UTC]

yus XD

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Freckled-Kat In reply to TheStarCitizen [2012-07-13 17:55:46 +0000 UTC]

WEE

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TheStarCitizen In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-13 18:02:40 +0000 UTC]

c:

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Flufftail-cat [2012-07-11 23:57:06 +0000 UTC]

Can't critic right now. Sorry. But looks great!

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Freckled-Kat In reply to Flufftail-cat [2012-07-12 02:10:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you ;W;

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Flufftail-cat In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-12 02:21:57 +0000 UTC]

Yup!

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beaniethecat [2012-07-11 03:42:03 +0000 UTC]

<3 I love that song.
BEEN LISTENIN' TO IT SINCE THE START.

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Freckled-Kat In reply to beaniethecat [2012-07-11 15:15:06 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAAAAAY ;W; <3

and beanie is it okay that i use this icon some one just gave me? ;3;
i still have the thumbnails on my profile so it won't change ;W;

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beaniethecat In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-11 18:29:58 +0000 UTC]

Sure I don't mind! :3

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Freckled-Kat In reply to beaniethecat [2012-07-11 23:18:38 +0000 UTC]

i think i'll just stick with this ^^

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Helkiethree [2012-07-10 21:37:41 +0000 UTC]

I luv dat soooooooooooooooooooong!!

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Freckled-Kat In reply to Helkiethree [2012-07-10 22:58:18 +0000 UTC]

IKR! WOOOOOOOOH

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Helkiethree In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-11 00:04:49 +0000 UTC]

YEAAHHHHSHH!! WOOO!

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aurothekitty [2012-07-10 21:20:11 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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Freckled-Kat In reply to aurothekitty [2012-07-10 22:58:10 +0000 UTC]

;W; <3

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choco-bit [2012-07-10 20:27:34 +0000 UTC]

Freckles...?
Oh um... Can you... Teach me... How to draw amazing, as you?? ;A; <33
OMG IT'S JUST AMAZING
MY ART IS REALLY CRAPPY
I WANT TO LEARN
I JUST CAN'T uvu <3

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Freckled-Kat In reply to choco-bit [2012-07-10 22:58:02 +0000 UTC]

awww CHOCOOOO ;;

YOUR ART IS AMAZING OKAY?!?! ;A; DON'T CHU SAY IT'S CRAPPY YOU FLUFFY MONSTER YOU

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choco-bit In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-11 08:20:38 +0000 UTC]

<3 ;U;

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qnerdi [2012-07-10 20:15:13 +0000 UTC]

This is very nice! Your use of textures and shading goes along well with your style.
My only critique would be the posing, it seems a bit off. Mainly because I. Not sure what freckles is sitting on, where the edges are, etc. it seems like it might be flat ground, but the paws bend forward, as if hanging off an edge. And the tail looks like it falls off a separate edge right behind freckles. My only real critique is to possible work on posing a little to make sure that, even when you're making a 'blank' background, we can tell where exactly the character stands.

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Freckled-Kat In reply to qnerdi [2012-07-10 22:54:25 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks X'D i actually forgot to make the layer on sai out of being invisable when i saved it! XD i forgot to add it back in when i posted XD

LOLOLOL thanks so much for critiquing btw ;W; <3 i love constructive criticizer ;w;

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ashtail-cat [2012-07-10 20:10:00 +0000 UTC]

why ish all your art so gorgeous and cute? ish makes me jealous

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Freckled-Kat In reply to ashtail-cat [2012-07-10 22:52:57 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks ashiee ;w; <3

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SlimeWolf [2012-07-10 20:05:27 +0000 UTC]

Freckles <3

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Freckled-Kat In reply to SlimeWolf [2012-07-10 22:52:46 +0000 UTC]

;W; <3

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SlimeWolf In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-10 23:51:14 +0000 UTC]

:33

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m-e-o-w-l-a-c-e [2012-07-10 20:04:09 +0000 UTC]

omfg freckles
gimme that eye style I LOVE IT.

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Freckled-Kat In reply to m-e-o-w-l-a-c-e [2012-07-10 22:52:40 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks a bunchie ;w;

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m-e-o-w-l-a-c-e In reply to Freckled-Kat [2012-07-10 22:57:29 +0000 UTC]

You're welcomeew~ ;w;

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Candii-apple [2012-07-10 20:02:05 +0000 UTC]

o my gosh so cute ;w;

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