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Thought I'd comment seeing as you have a lack of comments. The drawings in there are very good, but the backgrounds are quite messy. And then I can't really understand what's going on because the plot's confusing, and I can't read some of the text
Just thought I'd give you a little harsh critique!
Of course, like I said, the drawings are still great.
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It's a whole grasp of things
that and I'm having some hometown trouble
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