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Freedomcomes — Look At Me
Published: 2008-08-29 23:47:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 59; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description If you can live with me, can I live with myself?
If you can love me, can I love myself?
My hair, my lips,
My eyes, my hips,
On which you place your hands.
Then you hold me,
And tell me I'm beautiful.

If you believe it's true,
Then I'll believe with you.
But I need you to tell me
Just what it is you see,
When you look at me.

If I look into my mirror, and see myself smile,
It's just because you told me, you'd be there in a while,
When I see myself,
Without you there to guide me,
I see only faults,
I hate my own body.
But then you come to me,
And tell me I'm beautiful.

If you believe it's true,
Then I'll believe with you.
But I need you to tell me
Just what it is you see,
When you look at me.

In that one moment, when your eyes rest on me,
The smile that lights your face, is all I need to see.
My eyes, my hips,
My hair, my lips,
Which hunger for your kiss.
Then you hold me,
And tell me I'm beautiful.

If you believe it's true,
Then I'll believe with you.
But I need you to tell me
Just what it is you see,
When you look at me.
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Comments: 5

fallenstar7 [2008-08-30 22:57:00 +0000 UTC]

i really really really <3 this

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Freedomcomes In reply to fallenstar7 [2008-08-31 12:14:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for the commenting, they mean more than faves!! But thanks for the fave too!

xxx

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fallenstar7 In reply to Freedomcomes [2008-09-01 22:09:56 +0000 UTC]

oh sure its was good

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applexxjacks [2008-08-29 23:50:09 +0000 UTC]

I love this and totally agree.
Oh and I love how I connected with this right away when I saw it and read it.
(:

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Freedomcomes In reply to applexxjacks [2008-08-29 23:57:51 +0000 UTC]

wow thanks so much! I love how just one comment can make someone's work feel a little appreciated!

Thanks for the fave also!

xxx

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