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freeshell In reply to cognitiveg [2004-09-06 21:56:31 +0000 UTC]
That is a thoughtfull insight. Thank you so very much for your support!
~Shelly
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TheMoroseCherub [2004-09-06 02:02:07 +0000 UTC]
Indeed I think we all have seen, or ARE seeing times like this. Such times are well described in this piece. Your heart aches because of a love gone awry, but you have no time to stop and catch your breath or lick your wounds, for the world is like a rabid beast nipping at you heals. You look back to find happiness and worry about missed oppertunities, and when you face foreward again the road is thrice split, and you have no idea which direction to follow. Sorry if I overanalyzed the piece, but it just goes to show you have made a thing of beauty, in that others can so well realte to it, and hence connect with you. Nice work.
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freeshell In reply to TheMoroseCherub [2004-09-06 21:55:21 +0000 UTC]
I enjoy your comments.. they make me think and process all possible ideas.
Thank you for reading the ideas I write down and call poetry.
~Shelly
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TheMoroseCherub In reply to freeshell [2004-09-07 18:11:08 +0000 UTC]
And thank you for penning it all down for us to enjoy.
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