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Published: 2002-11-12 01:28:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 25
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Description A detached pair, once united with love
Your heart beating faster and isolated tears pouring from your eyes
Feelings and emotions like steam from a boiling geyser
Pain stings…life lies.

Remembering is unbearable, but forgetting is impossible
Depressing days…unforgivable nights.

Loneliness and happiness wrapped in a dismal black package
Life is engulfed by darkness.
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Comments: 8

nattle [2003-01-31 00:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Remembering is unbearable, but forgetting is impossible

That pretty much wraps it up. Heartfelt words, good work.

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ekg [2003-01-21 02:29:22 +0000 UTC]

well written...and yes, i think most can relate....
"pain stings...life lies"
but aint it great to find some light
within the darkness?

very good. i liked.
thanks for sharing.

ViNce

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lilaminalcracker [2003-01-21 00:07:58 +0000 UTC]

This is a very good poem.
I wish you'd upload some more!


I really liked it...short, to the point, and very touching

*dee*

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anne-joline [2002-12-11 06:43:00 +0000 UTC]

very touching..i like your poem.

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riot-alone [2002-11-12 17:09:44 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh gr....why such sadness, in such a happy persons poem...

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eternium [2002-11-12 07:21:38 +0000 UTC]

i can feel the essence of the poem deeply thanx for sharing

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blueraven7171 [2002-11-12 02:23:10 +0000 UTC]

I like it ....."Remembering is unbearable, but forgetting is impossible
Depressing days…unforgivable nights." I felt the depths of despair in that one.....It is good to be able to read something and feel the emotion the writer intended........keep it up.

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proslacker28 [2002-11-12 01:30:03 +0000 UTC]

well i hope your happy
you mad me sad
goodjob

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