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Published: 2016-03-14 16:00:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1885; Favourites: 161; Downloads: 0
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rain wakens me at dawn and says,
"I washed the world clean
just for you.
make it what you will."
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I've always liked the rain. This just made me like it a thousand times more!
May every raindrop offer a fresh start~
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I awoke to a clean slate - a new day. The grass is greener, livlier. The ponds are full. The birds are singing their minds. And I wondered at the gift handed to me.
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This is something lovely to take the sting out of a "miserable" day
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Reminds me of the chorus of this song 
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Reading this is like breathing in the clean air after a storm, both in a literal and figurative sense...I can feel my spirit ruffling its feathers like a robin, ready to take flight.
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Thank you for sharing this lovely poem of hopefulness and renewal. Sometimes we need a gentle rain to rinse the accumulated dust from our lives, and ultimately, we live by the decisions that we make.
The wisdom of the magnets speaks again.
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You said it about rinsing the dust away! Many thanks for sharing such a thoughtful response to this, my dear! 
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You're very welcome. Thanks for continuing to write loveliness so that I have interesting things to comment on.
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Sun puts me to bed with a colorful sunset
and the fading light whispers,
"Thank you for spinning
colors in my sunrays.
Today, you did magic."
And sun kisses me and all the flowers
to bloom.
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This made the most wonderful shivers bloom all over my skin -- I absolutely love it!! Phenomenal response, my dear! 
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Make it dirty again.
(Poor world)
I love this installment! You're so close to the finish, too!
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And the dance goes on!
Indeed -- as of tomorrow, I can count the days on one hand! Crazy!! Thanks for cheering the magnets and me to the finish, my dear!
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thanks for all you do, rain. i'll keep the air clean for you so you won't turn acidic. d:
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I do wish we'd get some rain in Colorado. You have made me realize that that is for a variety of reasons!
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Dry spells are no fun, on many fronts! 
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This is just fantastic. I love the meter of the last line, especially.
(If you'll entertain a response from me for just a second...
And thence I said to the rain at night,
to the shrewd rain clouds imbued with starlight,
"I made the world mine, for me and for you,
please wash it again, so we might start anew."
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Such a gorgeous response!! To the beautiful cycle of creation -- and to your glorious way with words, my dear!
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This is a very beautiful comment-poem to a very beautfiul poem.
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A blessing it was,
for my creativity
and soon my ideas were to flow
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The very best of blessings, indeed!
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and keep
breathing
(very important, lol)
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both in and out...
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The gentle sound of rain drops echo through the night, as though the sky weeps with you, as you do every night.
Till dawn's gentle break, as the first rays of the magnificent sun paint the now scattered clouds in pinks and orange, the scent of the earth refreshingly cool after the rain's end.
You feel a gentle breeze grazing your cheek, alerting you for the long day ahead of you.
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Reading this, I took such a deep breath in of magic. Simply gorgeous, my dear.
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Reminds me of Noah and his Arc. Speaking of which, has anyone seen the movie Noah? Wonder if it's good, if I should see it?
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I have seen it. It's not a bad movie in itself -great cast, Aronofsky does his job impeccably- but let me tell ya, if you are expecting anything close to the original story from the Genesis you are in for a huge disappointment.
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Hmm,I saw the film about the Exodus last year. Nothing wrong with the cast and a good story, but it felt like they couldn't decide on what to put the effort on. No character development and only halfheartedly recreating the mythology around Mose. The result, for me, was a movie without anything catching the viewer, no attachment. I'm just worried Noah would be the same experience.
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Yep, I had the exact same impression after watching Exodus. I'm afraid if you didn't like Exodus you won't like Noah either.
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Fair enough. Thanks for the heads up I suppose.
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I haven't seen it, alas. Perhaps someone else has!
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"rain rain wash away those nasty dreams of mine and clean my world."
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Thank goodness it's up to the task! lol
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I'm so truly pleased to hear it. Many thanks for the kind words, my dear!
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you're welcome!
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fresh start to a new day. I like it
its been raining where I live lately so this one is really relatable.
I think mornings with thunderstorms are the best. I'm actually happy and excited on those mornings, lol. thunder is the best alarm clock!
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For sure!! We almost never get thunderstorms in my neck of the woods, so the "thunderstorm alarm clock" happened to me for pretty much the first time the other day. SO COOL that it visits you more often!! 
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"And I will wash it again one day
if I must, that is.
For You can make the world be great.
But people can choose wrong."
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