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friedinsanity — Glimpses of Lunacy 3
Published: 2011-08-17 15:13:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 289; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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A third glimpse of lunacy. The cat's name is Vince. He belongs to my neighbour.The bananas do not have names, and they belong to me.
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haha this is totally my kind of piece! this is great!
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Thanks a lot, mate!
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I knew you would!
Thanks very much!
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Heyo chap, I'll be giving you some critique.
First, I like the idea and the colors. It's certainly original, and eye catching.
The biggest problem lies with the cat. The edge of the cat towards the light is far too crisp. Cats are fuzzy, and so they usually don't have as much of a defined egde. Also, the light on all the other objects is yellowish, and the light on the cat is white. I'd add some yellow to the cat to make it more of the same scene.
The shadow on the cat needs work as well. It's too close and too dense--so much so that it kind of looks like the cat's levitating. xD When adjusting the shadow, pay attention to the direction of the light and the texture the cat is sitting on. Where the cat's shadow overlays dimples in the fruit thing, the shadow will be even darker. You'll also want to consider the shadows on the bananas--the light direction seems a little funky with them...
Anyhow! Hope this is helpful. ^^
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What truly tremendous critique! 
I see indeed about the cat. I'm gonna try and fuzz it up a little if I can. And try some yellower light.
The bananas were hardest in getting their light right, as their original position was different and so trying to change the light on them was difficult. But yes, its still not quite right.
The cats shadow I'm actually rather happy about, but I see what you mean. I'll see if I can do anything about it.
Thanks again.
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Really want some bananas now... Super cool colors man! The cat is scaring me, but it wouldn't be the same without it.
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Thank you, mate. As for the bananas, They're All Mine!
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Oh yes, bananas are most exciting creatures.
I always get excited when I see a banana, so this was a great piece to work on.
Thanks very much, mate.
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