TheDviousOne [2019-11-27 01:54:08 +0000 UTC]
Hello, I'm here from to give you a comment
After looking over this sheet, I'm liking how developed and well-thought out you've made the fashion aspect of this world you're creating. It's familiar, but also has it's own spin to it to separate it from any existing fiction. I also like level of detail in your more "complete" images, like the portraits and the necklaces for wed couples. Although, I kind feel that that two portraits of the prince and king take up way too much space. It would be also be nice if we got a set of what lower-class couple tronemi looks like, instead of just a description. The whole point of a ref sheet is to provide... well, reference of what something looks like. I guess the only criticism i have is the overall organization of this sheet. Things look like they were placed sporadically all over the page, and it makes it hard to follow along.
With a info- heavy sheet like this, it would be good to separate things a bit. For example, first start off with portraits, one of each class (whether you want each of them to be detailed is up to you.) And then the next section could be about the lower class, going into detail about what their clothes and accessories look like, maybe differences between the men and the women. The next about the about the higher-class and so on. Of course, this is just an example, and people organize their reference sheets in all sorts of ways. I would recommend looking up some to see which type of formatting would work best with you.
Great job overall. There's really not much i can comment on so i hope what little i suggested is useful to you. I wish you luck on this world you're creating!
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Frithuswith In reply to TheDviousOne [2019-11-27 14:31:20 +0000 UTC]
Itβs a really good idea to add order instead of just creating a sketch dump! So Iβll definitely do this next time- also debating to revamp it as the fashion may revolve more heavily around silk now!
thank you very much!
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