Comments: 8
Kitkatrh [2013-06-16 01:55:41 +0000 UTC]
it's funny how he conveniently left out the fact that she has red hair!
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BrookieH [2012-09-11 03:20:11 +0000 UTC]
Must......keep....reading
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sAmSeeker06 [2011-05-31 07:29:25 +0000 UTC]
i love it!
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Graffiti560423 [2011-04-16 23:58:36 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! Not as good as the first chapter though. Too short. To spacey. Brilliant start though, and I want chapter 3!
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froggy21997 In reply to Graffiti560423 [2011-04-17 02:19:25 +0000 UTC]
this wasn't too short!
and chapter 3 is in the works at the moment to hang tight
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