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(experimenting a bit, I hope the "floating page" effect works 
I'll shut it now and upload the next one
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Suspeeense! 0o0
And I like the floating page thing! It's really cool looking!
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Well, this is certainly an interesting style, and I do hope to see it again. But, perhaps not for an actual comic page. To be honest, I'm not really certain what's happening here, and, to someone who doesn't know better and if it wasn't labled as a comic page, it doesn't seem like it has relevance to the comic.(though, I know it does, I just don't know how. Just that it does)
I'm pretty sure this is a door opening, but I am only guessing that based upon the last page, otherwise, this... I'm not even sure what I'd call it. This is something I would(and might, because I love it as a stand alone picture) use as a background for my computer.
I love the splatter at the edge of the page, and I think it would be great for a chapter cover page or in one panel to emphasize a point, and I also like how you...textured? the silhouette. But... the red. I don't know what that is, or is supposed to represent, because, well, it kind of just looks like a lava lamp, and it's what threw me with the whole page.
So, the design is awesome, and I would like to see more stuff in this style with other things.
Now, I'm gonna go find the other page.
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Ahhh too messy, isn't it?
Well yes, as it is not meant to be a stand alone thing, I take it for granted that those who see this
have also seen the previous page (and hopefully will see the next one too)(that's one of the reason
whyΒ I uploaded this one and the 13th at the same time, and actually this one was not meant to be,
but I thought that jumping from the 11th to the 13th would be too confusing so I made this one...
ironically it seems I managed to actually make it even more confusing!!
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This should be Kozmotis entering The Chamber where the fearlings are kept (in the previous pages he is
struggling not to open a door, which is the one that leads here). The reddish light is the one coming off the only source
of light that is in the other chamber where Koz was drawing on the wall, but...well..it isn't that obvious to guess,actually!
I'm having quite a bit of troubles making these pages because on one hand I expect the Fearling chamber to be as dark as it gets
and so no light at all....then again I would like to show you guys what is going on IN there and if it is just a black splatter...er....
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I'm glad you liked the splatter effect!! And as usual I'm truly grateful for your honestΒ feedback! Experimenting is all nice and fine,
but if I don't know if I'm achieving anything it sort of becomes a bit pointless...
So, thank you so very much!!You are Amazing!!
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Sorry this has taken so long to reply to! I wound up at the bottom of my replies, so it took a while to get to.
No, it's not that it's too messy, it was just too vague in its significance. Because, the chamber he was in wasn't actually red, the secondary lighting was red... does that make sense? Like, it wasn't the walls, or anything in the room, it was the lighting that set the mood, so there wasn't anything discernible about the color alone that told me that it was the previous room.
And yes, I know what you mean with the black thing, as... well, basically a goth myself, I see where you're coming from, because I dress my characters in a lot of black. What I usually have to do when I put them in any kind of dark setting(since, up until recently, everything was in traditional) one would be a shade lighter than black, and the deepest shadows on their clothes were black. Or, if I want more emphasis on my character being the hypothetical bad guy, they would be the darkest object, not the background, to emphasize they they are even darker than the darkness.
Yes, I loved the splatter, might I ask how you did that, actually? Is it something you drew in, or was it a frame or something?
And no problem, I always want to be honest when people ask, because, like you said, everyone may hate what you're doing, but you'll never know if someone doesn't tell you!(But, I only do this when people ask for my honest opinion, because some people(like me, honestly) don't really care about others' opinions, because this is their art they do it their own way. But some people, like you, are also a people pleaser and try to work with your audience, which I actually find admirable, because I would ask people's opinions, but I doubt I would actually take them into much consideration when drawing things, because I'm not drawing for them, I'm drawing for me.)
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This is an awesome picture! Well done!
And thus the FEarlings mobbed him and proceeded to do their version of gang rape.
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aww 
yes....finally the fearlings are coming up!!
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You're welcome! Oh noes, Fearlings!
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I give the floating page effect a thumb's up. It adds to the surreal/fragmented feel you've been establishing. I think your experiments have been working out pretty well (and this is certainly the best part of the story to do it, since its a bit disjointed anyway). I especially like the almost marbleized silhouette of Koz.
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Ah thank you so much!!
hehehe yes, I had the feeling it was sort of now or never for trying the crazy stuff,
since this part is meant to be oniric and nightmarish and the border of reality
is quite blurred, I can play a bit with surrealism (gotta be carfeul not get carried away
too much with that!
Thank you!! It turned out quite "marbled", didn't it? I actually used the image of the following
page and pasted it on top as a sort of "texture" and it came out like this...Weird stuff!
thank you again my dear!!I hope you will like the new one!!
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How do you like the bands new uniforms??!!
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uhm...I'd say they need a bit more of frilly details....but that's just me!
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Hmm your right... TO THE SEWING MACHINE!!
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ah thank you so much Darling!!!!!!
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aww 
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aaaww your welcome^^
there' sno need to be nerves my friend.
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awwww
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your welcome my froggy.
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oddio....Γ¨ un "uh" positivo?
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no no no, Γ¨ che Γ¨ figo, ma non sapevo bene che dire! XD
scusa i mie commenti scemi - come vedi dopo ho continuato la trafila di "uh" (sembroΒ un gufo XD)
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hahhaha ma no figurati!! SOno io che ho l'autostima di un rospo. Tirato sotto da una macchina.
Grazie mille gufetto allora!!
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aww thank you so much my dear!!!:glom:
I was really nervous I was making a mess XD
<33
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Oh no no no, it was impressive. 
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aw thank you so much!!!!
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You're welcome!
Yeah.
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for whats supposed to be happening and about about to happen, I think the whole floating page thing you got going on is a pretty cool thing to do!
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awww Β again thank you so much for your lovely feedback!!
Being as nervous as I am about these new things I'm experimenting here
I really really appreciate that!! THANK YOU!
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You're welcome! and you really shouldn't worry so much, you're a really wonderful artist!
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aghh
thank you so much dear!!! hahah and I guess I cant' help but worry, it's my nature,
but as long as I get Amazing comments like yours I can't really complain, can I?
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you really shouldn't worry! You're so awesome, and I mean in more ways then your art!
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looks cool, but it seams something is missing, isn't it? ^.^'
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hehehe thank you dear!
Weeeellll
of this page, do you think it's "annoying" as a page?
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it super as a page... 
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