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Frost7 — Hanger Assembly pg3
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Published: 2009-02-20 00:02:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 1730; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 75
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Still just about starting.
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is there's gonna be a battle?? owh cant wait to read the next page
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thanks a lot 
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is that so? oh just take yer time dear
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Why man why ....breaking his ice and telling her about this secret ..LOL
"God ..Reair has a way to make others talk "
impressive conversation to know there character personalty INDEED
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lol thanks a lot man, Reair is no good girl, she is one really bad one, and both of this characters are no where liking each other very much,well the real thing havent started yet, man i wish i have more time to do the comic faster
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thanks a lot
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np
yeah... its not always easy finding time to draw *sigh*
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A few exchange of words and now she points a gun at him. I think the bishie boy better watch his back, or he would be shot by her sooner or later.
I find there is some spelling and grammer errors, otherwise, its well done.
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thanks a lot man, she is a cold hearted girl,no where near good, a really bad girl, she cares for nobody,if you were to fail,its gonna be epic.
i noticed the spelling errors, i got a little careless with this page. thanks for the pointers.
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very welcome. I can see she is a really bad one. She seems to kill anyone who will hinder her. Epic indeed.
yes, the spelling and the punctuation. It would be better if you focus on thse two points. Another suggestion I would like to put forward is a story page in which you detail this particular comic. I, for one, would like to know more.
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Aww, I feel sorry for that dude...
AND HE'S BISHIE! lol
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Wow a engine component that can read minds. Sounds like Event Horizon with the gravity drive that makes people go insane.
Critacism:
STOP BEING TOO GOOD. It's getting really hard to find things wrong with it lol. Maybe take more care with the backgrounds. Middle cell has a line to the right of the guy's head that seems out of place.
Btw i really liked Reair's pose in the bottom left cell. Very nice.
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thanks a lot man,sorry for the late thanks, i see, good critique man, i will always take note of that.
i was getting a little tired from drawing the page, so i got careless, just page 3, still got more stuffs to show. even when the machine could read minds,they are some major set backs.
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... Why is she pointing a gun at this head? Heh Awsome work here
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thanks a lot, well theyre not friends,they really dont like each other
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