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PearlyOwl [2017-12-02 12:38:22 +0000 UTC]

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Hello! I'm sorry I don't know much about photography, but I'll give this my best shot, since it's the one that stood out to me the most!

At first I thought it was an overgrown building, which is what the warm greens suggests. I love the way the cold light from the entrance contrasts the dull illumination of the interior, and I commend you for positioning or choosing to capture the screen in the middle at this angle. The slightly hidden angle of this improves the mystery and intrigue to this piece.

I've given you a slightly lower rating for vision and impact, because I'm not sure what the message is for this one; I, as a viewer, feel like an observer to a chance setting. I'm not sure of any message you might want to portray. The title derived from "psychiatric hospital" does not extend any sinister tone into the photograph, or indeed any chaos or confusion. But then again, perhaps the quiet absence of its patients is what makes this abandoned hospital such an interesting subject to photograph.

Please remember, I'm not a shutterbug, so I'm not used to thinking about so many aspects when viewing a photograph, and I may easily have missed something a veteran may not! On that note however, you may want to consider this from the perspective of someone like me.

As a photograph as a whole, it is very interesting, and give a feel of nostalgic emptiness. I like it, and I wish I could've explored it.

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themanpassingby [2017-09-22 22:11:13 +0000 UTC]

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This is fucking awesome.
I love your work very much, all the effort it takes to make this.
This clearly shows what no longer was and what could have been, i see hula hoops, wich is kanda sad, i'm assuming it was a kids hospital or something along those lines.
Green and yellow overflow all over the place, giving it a warm yet unwelcoming athmosphere to the whole composition.
I say that could have skipped the ceiling as it adds nothing to the picture in my opinion but, all in all, is a bloody great piece of art mate.
Cheers

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