Ceratomia [2017-02-13 19:36:05 +0000 UTC]
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Let me start out by saying the light in this is beautiful, (which is what really MAKES a photograph beautiful in and of itself imo) and the angle at which this is taken is unique and interesting. it's a good way to connect to the audience, especially in the urbex capacity. It's almost like you are looking into a secret world; as if ghosts are to walk across the image, unsuspecting of being caught on camera.
So it's beautiful there--strong angle, great light, good capture. The problems I have are mostly with the post-processing of this image. I would be curious to see the RAW file. This is a popular way to edit urbex images, but I'm not sure if it works well in this case. It looks forced, too unreal, when urbex benefits greatly (in my opinion) from a heavier "realistic" look.
While I do love the angle, perhaps seeing more of the room in the image as opposed to the wall would be good (so cropping would be an option is what I mean.) While I love the "secrecy" of how this is shot, I feel the wall framing the image is a little too much; takes up a little too much space in the image in relation to the room itself.
Beautiful photo though, I like the intent particularly. It must've been an interesting shoot.
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