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Published: 2014-01-06 08:31:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1382; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 0
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yyaay my first drawing for 2014!! /throws confetti
i was trying to practice painting and it turned into blackice >w<
a lot more angsty than what i usually draw... i think.... maYBE???
still kinda unhappy with a few of those frames but wHAT ELSE IS NEW
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ooo really like the effect of different settings changing <3
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Thank you!! And I'll try >w<
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very well drawn.
why have the picture getting darker?
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ur welcome
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I like this actually. The only things I would suggest for improvement would be to make the frame transition slightly smoother (maybe add a couple more in-between frames?), and make Jack's smile look a little more natural. I like the sort of rough feel to it, but the smile in the end seems... like to sharp of a line. Not that him smiling seems odd, just that the line looks.... to clean for this piece. With everything else being rough lines it stands out oddly. But that's just my 2 cents. Overall I do like it. It manages to say a lot without words. I definitely say keep it up ^_^.
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Aaah thank you!! And thank you for taking the time to comment more in-depth on it and the constructive criticism!! I really appreciate it!! I'll try to work on that for next time. ;w;
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