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Published: 2006-12-07 17:02:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 66918; Favourites: 515; Downloads: 5831
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Random Doujin I've been working off and on for like...a year! And it's only 12 frickin pages! (*cough*cough*procrastinator*cough*)Anyways. Just a goofy comic that may or may not focus on the relationship of Naruto and Hinata!
Please if you read this-this is (technically) my first doujin any tips or advice is very welcomed.
(i.e. use screentones you lazy-ass!) <---I'm kidding (don't be mean, please)
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Aww, the days when they'd get D-rank missions! It feels like so long ago... *looks at year 2006 at the bottom* It WAS long ago. XP
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LOL! Yeah...old school.
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They were good times; it's just that the current events are much more epic.
Oh, thank you very much for the llama badge. ^w^
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I need to get caught up with the epic-ness!
no prob! ^_^
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I'm not that up to date myself either. XP
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ur drawing is awesome but u got kakashi's hand wrong it should have a glove or something
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I am thinking about making a doujin too, I want to ask what is better, keep the traditional form from right to left or like you have it here? It is very nicely drawn, btw.
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Thank you! ^_^ As far as Right to Left or Left to Right, I found it easier for me to do it Left to Right, but if you're more accustomed to Right to Left then, by all means, go for it!
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Nore natural for me is L>R but I thought about making it similar to the original manga, so R>L, also because that is the traditional manga style...
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love your drawing style and story 
i think this is my 3th time watching it hehe love it so much
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Thank you! XD I'm glad you like it!
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I'm not much much of a NaruHina fan, but I got the Alternate ending and the original ending form a friend of mine, and I thought I check it out. the first page is good. Can't wait to read the rest.
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It's ok if you're not a NaruHina Fan (I like both NaruSaku and NaruHina), and I don't really lay it on thick in the Doujin (until the last page ^_^) Well, I hope you enjoy it! XD
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gorgeous art! Wow! I mean wow! I can't wait to read the rest of it! 
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Nice job! You got the characters down pretty well.
Screen tone? I can understand for a doujnshi, but just to remind you, Misashi Kishimoto uses screentone very rarely. He usually uses single crosshatching, and when he does use screentone, it's usually to imply further perspective or some serious moment or expression. ^_^
I have a Naruto doujnshi too! Check it out. ^_-
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Sorry this is all late, I was camping but I'm back now!
I love how Kishimoto uses crosshatching! And I love his backgrounds!
Alright! I'll go check out your Doujin too! ^_^
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meep!
camping? I LOVE camping... ((It's all about the s'mores, man.))
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Well, I like it! I have 32 pages in my comic so far, although its not about Naruto at all. Just some orginal characters on a work in progress story-line...yeah...
yours looks better than mine...*sobs
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That's great that's great I'm a Creator of my own comics too
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