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Published: 2018-03-21 21:37:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 489; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Let's start with introducing my merchant guys one by one, along with a Whitebeard commander that are related to their abilities ! So here's Hilinn with Haruta, with additional informations ! (at first, it was just a drawing for for of a RP group, as I was roleplaying Hilinn AND Haruta.)Name: Hilinn
Nickname/s: Mr Freckles/ that negociator dude ....
Age: 23
Date of Birth: 1st march
Species: human
Gender: male
Occupation on the ship: Negociator/Navigator
Personality: Selfless, affectionate, discrete and somewhat sneaky. A great listener
Powers: Devil fruit. Mystical Zoan of the tanuki (a shapeshifter racoon) - does not have any control over it-. // is aware of the fourth wall : the fact that there are people out there they can't see but who are looking at them like they are watching some kind of fictional stories. Somehow and sometimes can hear voices narrating thing that he shouldn't know.
Weapon: None.
Goal: Unknown
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Comments: 11
I really like his expression! He has a very tender and warm smile and bright eyes, and I reeeally love freckles! ♡.♡
Oh, and his Tanuki Devil Fruit is awesome, hope to see more of him soon!
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Oh thank you very much !
I wish I could write a story in English to share it with people like you, but I don’t feel confident enough... ;3;
I honestly haven’t planned much with his devil fruit, as a shapeshifter and a Zoan at the same time can be seen as pretty much Mary Sue//Gary Tsu material.. for much part, it served more of a way to restrain him because he would not even try to try and control it.
Anyway... I’ll really glad you like Hilinn qvq stay tuned, I’ll introduce the same way Frio with another commander next time ~
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Oh please if you want to write a Story about them, I´d be more than happy to read it!!
It doesn´t really matter if you make any writing mistakes, and I am from Germany anyways, so I probaly wouldn`t even notice them xD
Naah it doesn´t Mary Sue-ish at all. For it being a mythological zoan it seems pretty well balanced! :3
Uuuuuuh I´ve read through Friðs and Behras profiles right now! I really enjoy seeing your Crew! They are so lovely drawn and their characters are very well developed and so vivid, I love it!
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I'm trying to write it in French for now, if people like it in French, then I'll work on it in English- I just want it to be perfect ;v;
I'm glad if he's not Mary Sue-ish then... I want my characters to be original, strong enough to survive but not too much. ^^"
And THANK YOU for looking at everyone's profile, I really appreciate ♥ (and if you want, I posted the last one, Silver's earlier. ^^ )
... I love my little merchants ♥♥♥
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Uh thats a great Idea! I really hope that the French Version is well received among your Readers so taht I can read it in english soon :3
Ooooh I feel you xD But he is awesome, as are your other OC´s!
And I just now looked at Silvers Profile, he is suuuper cool! I especially like his Goal, it is prette unique, and I think I have never seen a merchant Crew before, it`s amazing!
Keep up the good work!
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I hope so too ~ My best friend is writing a story too so we'll post at the same time our chapters, so we can motivate each other. ^^ !
My english is not perfect but i'll do my best. ^w^ ♥
And thank you very much ! Since Silver is based on my very first OC, and his goal makes that he is the one who brought the little merchants together, so he's kinda important in his own way c; ♥
A merchant crew is actually made to be something unprecedented, even after YEARS of fanfictions in the fandom c; no one have seen it so yeah, it's interesting to develop c;
So.. Thank you very much for your comments, it really make me so happy every time - ♥
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Thats a clever idea, Keep it up!
Aye, Silver is awesome! B)
Always welcome honey~
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You know, I was losing motivation to keep working on this project, but reading your comment just motivated me a little. So I just posted the prologue on fanfiction.net on French along with the prologue’s illustration on DA-
I’ll see if I get reviews that can motivate me again so I can finally finish my chapter 4.
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Oh please dont get demotivated!! D:
I wanna read your Story too, so: MOTIVATIOOOOOON!!!!!!
You can do it!! WOOOOOH!!!!
I really hope you get good Reviews on it, stay motivated!!
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Aawwwwww <3
I just squealed in the middle of the town. Thank you very much for this it’s just adorable of you <3
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Oh my you are super cute xD
Always welcome
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