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Furgemancs — Last sacrifice part 01

Published: 2009-02-28 07:57:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 2484; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 20
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Description A new alternate ending idea indeed a sad one again
In this story the Baron captured Right to use his power for his newest weapon. Meanwhile he destroyed the hedgehog's emerald so Right decided to do a last, great effort to stop this mad man, but you can read it in the short story I write below^^

I love the half transformation on this pic, indeed it can be a bit more... shyny, no? And I say nothing about the background >w<

Hope you like it and that's the main^^

A similar place. Nothing else but machines beeping and far yammering surrounded the half-light laboratory.

“So this had happened at last…” sighed Right who floated in a tube. The evil Baron cuffed his hands, took away his emerald and used it to give energy for his new cannon. Unfortunately the machine sipped out all of its power and then the crystal broke into pieces. Right’s hours had numbered.

They took away his power with a tube that connected to his chest. The machine they connected him on showed the level of the gained energy.

“That damned Baron…” he gasped heavily “He wants to use me like a generator to charge his killer weapon up just to destroy everything I love.” Right clenched his fist “I don’t let him do it! He wants energy? Then I give him all!”

He closed his eyes and concentrated. In the tube the energy’s flowing leveled up. Around the hedgehog the fluid started whirling. Most part of his fur turned into gold and red stripes appeared on it. In the same time Right felt great pain like something want to tear him apart from inside.

“Just a little more” said to himself Right but suddenly the door opened and a person ran in.

To be continued...

Right and story (c) aka me
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Comments: 109

Furgemancs In reply to ??? [2009-12-30 12:27:48 +0000 UTC]

I know you want to see it but I just can't continue XS sorry

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hyperdark06 [2009-09-06 07:36:55 +0000 UTC]

so sad *cries*

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Furgemancs In reply to hyperdark06 [2009-09-06 13:53:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you unfortunately I wont finish it

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hyperdark06 In reply to Furgemancs [2009-09-06 14:06:25 +0000 UTC]

thats ok at least its still good wanna rp

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Furgemancs In reply to hyperdark06 [2009-09-06 15:57:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you^^

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hyperdark06 In reply to Furgemancs [2009-09-06 15:58:47 +0000 UTC]

wanna rp

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Furgemancs In reply to hyperdark06 [2009-09-06 17:32:25 +0000 UTC]

sorry but no

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hyperdark06 In reply to Furgemancs [2009-09-06 17:45:22 +0000 UTC]

why

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Furgemancs In reply to hyperdark06 [2009-09-06 18:12:55 +0000 UTC]

sorry I have too many guys I rp with

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hyperdark06 In reply to Furgemancs [2009-09-06 18:16:27 +0000 UTC]

i see

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Furgemancs In reply to hyperdark06 [2009-09-07 05:56:53 +0000 UTC]

really sorry maybe next time

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hyperdark06 In reply to Furgemancs [2009-09-07 06:09:35 +0000 UTC]

ok

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Furgemancs In reply to hyperdark06 [2009-09-07 06:59:41 +0000 UTC]

?

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hyperdark06 In reply to Furgemancs [2009-09-07 14:05:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks u have a great snake oc as well

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Furgemancs In reply to hyperdark06 [2009-09-07 15:24:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much^^

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hyperdark06 In reply to Furgemancs [2009-09-07 16:28:59 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome my friend

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luvforanime [2009-06-27 20:29:52 +0000 UTC]

Right, isn't it possible to run from fate?

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Furgemancs In reply to luvforanime [2009-06-28 09:54:32 +0000 UTC]

Right: no it isn't

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Chouonsoku [2009-03-07 17:34:06 +0000 UTC]

I love this pic! It's so awesome! X3 And the colors are really great too! ^^

Chou: Please Right don't die... ;__; I'm gonna save you! ><

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Furgemancs In reply to Chouonsoku [2009-03-07 18:34:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you hon

Right: No! It's too dangerous!

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Chouonsoku In reply to Furgemancs [2009-03-11 17:22:29 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^

Chou: I don't care! I won't leave you!

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Furgemancs In reply to Chouonsoku [2009-03-11 19:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Right: Chou! This is an order!

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StrayTree [2009-03-03 16:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh boy... D:

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Furgemancs In reply to StrayTree [2009-03-03 19:47:15 +0000 UTC]

well... yes >w<

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SoftKeychains [2009-03-01 21:25:12 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, nice well done with the colouring!
I have to say a thing: you are definitely improving in terms of anatomy

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Furgemancs In reply to SoftKeychains [2009-03-02 08:29:53 +0000 UTC]

really? Oh thank you so much

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Fake-the-Reality [2009-03-01 03:15:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Great job with the picture, and the story

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Furgemancs In reply to Fake-the-Reality [2009-03-01 06:09:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Fake-the-Reality In reply to Furgemancs [2009-03-02 02:47:33 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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Effit [2009-02-28 21:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, much too close to Sonic Unleashed here.
But the actual picture is very good, you captured Right's emotion well.

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Furgemancs In reply to Effit [2009-03-01 06:09:28 +0000 UTC]

ah I see what you talking about, hmmm maybe but he wont turn into werehogXD
thank you so much

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Effit In reply to Furgemancs [2009-03-01 07:08:18 +0000 UTC]

Maybe not, you could be right, Right XD
You're welcome.

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Furgemancs In reply to Effit [2009-03-01 17:05:42 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Sonra-The-Hedgehog [2009-02-28 16:51:37 +0000 UTC]

O NO POOR RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Furgemancs In reply to Sonra-The-Hedgehog [2009-03-01 06:08:47 +0000 UTC]

sorry but yes

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Sonra-The-Hedgehog In reply to Furgemancs [2009-03-01 19:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Its ok...Hes gonna be ok right?

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Furgemancs In reply to Sonra-The-Hedgehog [2009-03-01 20:45:34 +0000 UTC]

nope >w<

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Sonra-The-Hedgehog In reply to Furgemancs [2009-03-01 20:49:10 +0000 UTC]

R really OwO

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Furgemancs In reply to Sonra-The-Hedgehog [2009-03-02 08:28:22 +0000 UTC]

*hug* really

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Sonra-The-Hedgehog In reply to Furgemancs [2009-03-02 17:08:50 +0000 UTC]

*Hug* Ohhh Right!

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Furgemancs In reply to Sonra-The-Hedgehog [2009-03-02 19:58:16 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwww

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Sonra-The-Hedgehog In reply to Furgemancs [2009-03-02 20:02:34 +0000 UTC]

*Sniff*

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Furgemancs In reply to Sonra-The-Hedgehog [2009-03-02 20:10:55 +0000 UTC]

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Sonra-The-Hedgehog In reply to Furgemancs [2009-03-02 20:17:26 +0000 UTC]

^w^

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lol20 [2009-02-28 16:35:09 +0000 UTC]

Cooool

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Furgemancs In reply to lol20 [2009-03-01 06:08:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks^^

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lol20 In reply to Furgemancs [2009-03-01 07:37:11 +0000 UTC]

Anytime ^^

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Minto-the-Fox [2009-02-28 14:30:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice picture and good story

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Furgemancs In reply to Minto-the-Fox [2009-03-01 06:08:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you dear^^

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Minto-the-Fox In reply to Furgemancs [2009-03-01 16:35:44 +0000 UTC]

No Problem :3

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