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Furihime — Comm Shiro and Kurai
Published: 2013-08-08 17:13:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 11822; Favourites: 1067; Downloads: 64
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Commission 1/2 for her OC Shiro and Kurai.I love their design very much, so detailed and full of frills
Yeah, I should have done the CG couple commission first as the first order, but right now I can just do a sketch
Art by me~ for commission info please visit my page
Thanks for commissioning
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This is really well done! All the proportions look good and the characters aren't stiff, which is a common problem. I absolutely love the facial expressions you gave these characters and the work shows great attention to detail.
The only piece of advice that I can think to offer is to blend out your markings for the toning and shading, this might help you get a more finalized and professional look. However you have great talent.
You seem to enjoy what you do because of the sheer amount of detail you put into this work, and I hope you will continue to try to improve. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Très beau dessin, l'idée est un peu banal mais est bien utiliser avec des vetements originaux. Le style graphique est bon mais peu etre amélioré sur plusieurs points. Les couleurs dans les tons chauds qui utiliser rendent bien et son en armonient avec l'image, mais voir les trait de crayon même fait exprès pour donner un laisse à désirer. L'image est mignone et touchante mais reste sans réel impacte même si les personnages montrent des émotions. C'est un très bon travail qui peut être amélioré même si il est deja supèrbe. Bonne continuation sur tes travaux ! (désoler que ce soit écrit en français)
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I would like to start off saying that I really like the shading you did on this. So far, I'm often impressed by your shading more than anything. It often does the artwork justice. However, I would like to see more colorful images than monochromic or sepia toned images.
Onto the two characters themselves, they seem to make a lovely couple. Though its e usual cliche angelxdemon thing, the way you've drawn the female character makes her seem very adorable.
Besides that, I can only pick at the little details of this image such as the ruffles, bow and frills. I think you can do better as they look, sort of unclean? Not the best way to word it but I think with more practice, you can draw ruffles and frills with ease.
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This is soooooo adorable!!!! U drew them very well!!! I have no complaints!!!! Except maybe the next drawing there should be color!!!! Great job though!!!,
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I love this. The shading is amazing and the detail is lovely. I love the look on his face like he is embarrassed and surprised at the same time. And with a flower in his hair it just makes him look even cuter. It would have been cool if you could have shown more of his wing or not have added it since he looks like a knight. I like that she an angel. Her dress, wings and hair are beautiful. They work amazing together. Stunning wok!
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You are a great drawer you should be a manga artist!!!!!!
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This is truly amazing <3 You are an awesome artist.
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This drawing is so beautiful and detailed! I like the way, you play with the colours and the transition from yellow to darker colours like a smooth violet! Awesome work, keep on drawing! Your drawing style is awesome, too!
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oh my gosh |! i love your art ! it is so amazing !!!
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DUDE. T_T there's not even proper grammar in this chain mail. Annalise dead. Annalise "is" dead. C'mon, either way, I'd have died, like, 4,000 times by now (pffffffft i'm exaggerating, so much <_<)
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Are you dumb enough to believe that?
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Erm.. I´m not shure but isn´t that illegal 
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If these things were true I'd have died like 40 times by now. :T
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haha i read this and survived ...CHAIN MAIL
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omg ur so good 
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This is a beautiful drawing. Be proud. ^_^
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joli création , un peux d' amour dans se monde de bruts
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A sketch? Waaah! Why is this so amazing?! //shot
They are adorable > v <
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It's so pretty and cute!! I love your art~!! X3
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Nice drawing my friend!
Can u check out my drawingss ?
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Beautiful and shows true emotional chemistry between the characters
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Omg~~ bby!! you made them sooo cute!!!
that pose!! *^* lol~
I love it sooo much~~
hehehe thank youuuuu~~~~ <33333
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You're very welcomed Berry-chaaan!! I hope you would like the next one also
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Awwwwwww <333
I'm sure I will love the next one soooo much!!!
thank you for making them sooo beautiful!!!
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