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Special request for , her OC Alice!Cute girls are always fun to draw! I always want to draw a cathedral, but I've never found a character that suit the theme. I'm also too lazy to design a random chara, so yeah, Alice seemed to suit the theme
You see, I rarely draw a BG building, should practice more I hope I can be a good fantasy artist, I really love to draw something like this
Anyway, even though this is not good enough, I hope you like it Rini-chan I've worked hard lol//slap and thank you so much for considering me as a friend..
Alice (c) =Rini-tan
Art by me
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Honestly, I find that this drawing isn't really clear enough. I feel that you could add far more detail, and that would, for me at least, make the artwork better.
I know this by looking at some of the parts of the drawing. The figure is very intricately detailed, but other things, such as the cathedral, are lacking in detail and variance in color. Also, you overuse the color yellow, which in moderation could bring a feeling of a bright and sunny day, but with this much yellow, it looks like a city of gold. (If you were trying for that, good job!) But, even though I've been giving a lot of criticism, I'd just like to say it's still a good drawing, and you are seriously a good artist.
If I offended you, I'm sorry.
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The vision is great over all, it's just that the first thing I noticed was the cathedral and that got me kind of confused. And my eyes kind of hurt from all that light.
The originality's great, i mean, the girl is perfect right there withe the cathedral, and the bird really fits in. And the tilting of the cathedral is very cool, it goes along with the girl.
For the technique, the colors seem to kind of blend in with each other, the cathedral and the ground which makes it hard to tell apart and doesn't really show the cathedral all that well. Some more dark colors would've been good. Everything's so light I can't really see, like looking into a sun. But the character is stunning, although I think the top of her head is a bit too.... light, can't really see it. Although it was probably done on purpose, a little darker probably would've helped.
For the impact, I feel like I can't really see the girl as much, because the cathedral is kind of distracting. But the theme is amazing, and the is portrayed quite wonderfully into the drawing.
Well, I'm not good with critiques, so I'm sorry if I said something that offends you
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Fly Away looks like a very classy type of drawing that can all most have the look and feel of a watercolor/oilpaint design in it's detail and over all appearance. It's bright and beautiful and gives you the feel of a school girl coming out and turning into something she wasn't or was caring for someone who didn't have the power to go on their own meaning the dove as the reference to a person.
VISION: why i give it a 4 star? The picture is quite clear and i can tell with the style it is blurry but that makes it what it is. She is drop-dead beautiful and her looks match up with her serious but spacey eyes. Her complection is fabulous and cute for her theme. Reasons against the vision is to me on the highest part of her hair on the right blends so well with that light source you can't see the headline that well and also with the long white hair mixes in with that. Her body doesn't have a lot of motion (the legs are very well done thu i have to say). The bricks look a little to free, and yes i understand that the theme/style of this is like that but the shaping looks a bit to loss and free.
ORIGINALITY: FULL on that one because it is an OC and the style of your draw matches with all your drawings and matches perfectly with the mood and source of the drawing.
TECHNIQUE: As i said it matches your style and the design of the picture, also the mood. But the shining ray/light it over doses the drawing a little, mainly on the upper right to the top on right side are bit to bright (not saying all of them are bad but because of the to brightness of the right top it intercepes with the head (main part of the body).
IMPACT: to me, the girl is bigger than she should at that distance from the cathedral, but because of that it gives the feel that only she is a little more important than her back ground while still saying the background is the second important, if that makes sense. Color is amazing and can tell where lighting is from and love the birds coloring to. The whites and blacks are nice and bolded.
Over all fanastic job, Tip for you try not to add so much detail for the background to over the top the main character inside.
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Ok, this is my first time doing this so here goes...
Firstly, it's a beautiful picture, the character is well done and her expression is perfect.
However, I think that the floor and the angle of the cathedral does not quite sit correctly. It seems like the cathedral is tilting... Away? If that makes any sense. Either way, it seems to me as if the character is... Standing out of the picture for the cathedral to be at this angle.
Other than that, I think it is a really amazing piece of work. The lighting, the shading... It's all very well done and I commend you!
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Oh my goodness, this has to be one of the bestest drawings you've ever done. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="37" height="25" alt="
I LOVE how you drawn the character! You're colouring and shading is, as always, spot on. The background is STUNNING, espeically the building, I can't drawing things like that e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f⦠" width="18" height="17" alt="
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ahhh love your art ~ do you happen to take requests?
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Character looks awesome, i love color of her hair and eyes. Amazing picture!
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Fantastically done ! Great Pic .. Love it !
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This is so beautiful and detailed! 
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I-is this for the contest?? If so, there's no way i'll win lol
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LOVE HER EXPRESSION!
and those hear/horn things in her hair. its cool 
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Ah my, this is really, really beautiful!!
The colors, the character, the background, everything is so stunning!Β (//v//
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Your digital art is awesome x) i love it
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I Want to draw anime like that 
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I'm pretty sure this isn't digital, it looks like either copics or watercolor ouo
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Idek, Copics have a watercolor-like effect when used wellΒ
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Β If she used copics, she would put it in the traditional category. But she didn't, she put it in the digital category. Thus she used a certain program. I bet she used SAI and also used textures to create this kind of effect.Β
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Oh, I didn't notice that, then she probably did, thank you for pointing that out!
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I really love this one, it's so detailed, the clothings, the colors, the sunlight -- everything is perfect! 
WHY ARE YOU SO PRO...??
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Thank you so much, chui dear, and no I'm bot pro Her design was already detailed from the start, as for the BG.... Don't you think it's weird?
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Whaaat? I thought the bg was very stunning and detailed! How you do that??
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I only draw the outline, and the details were... random...?
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