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To me there is something flat about the photo.
There seems to be texture and tiny highlights in your hair, but only right at the top of your forehead. I wish I could see it throughout the rest of your hair. Also the way the backdrop is set against the colour of your hair doesn't seem to be doing you any favours... especially as the depth of field begins to blur your hair, moreso on the right side than the left. There is also a slightly jarring effect at the very bottom, we can see the blue veins on a stark cold white chest.
I don't know what you were going for, but the bokeh on your neck that makes your chin line stand out looks weird to me.
Your eyes jump out, and those eye lashes look money. I am pretty ambivalent when it comes to the lips.
If it were me, I would have made sure more light was spilling onto your hair hair light. And not had it straight on your face, effectively washing out all the nice textures.
Do you shoot in raw?
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Thank you for the awesome constructive criticism, I really appreciate it and I do agree with most of the things you have pointed out
And yes, I shoot raw.
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Such a severe look, but such soft, delicate features. Amazing full lips that look insanely rich, and skin that looks like ivory. The hint of a beautful collar bone and eyes that shine. Soft gentle hair like a halo. It's just amazing...
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