Comments: 133
KoriMichele [2011-10-18 03:26:45 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
This is a lovely piece is both idea and execution. The color technique is ambitious, and works well in some places but is distracting in others. Cleaning up that technique would make this picture a perfect ten.
Drawing: The angles and perspective of the room is wonderful, the stacking of books, mice and clouds all seem to fit into the space realistically. The anatomy is exceptional in some places (Nezumi's hand holding the book) but slightly off in others (Shion's hand.) I'm unsure as to where Nezumi's arms are sitting in space- out of sight is not out of mind. I need some evidence of gravity to know how Nezumi's arm is resting on Shion- here a think a little more or less visual information would help that.
Painting: Mixing lots of bright colors into forms is an ambitious venture, and appears sloppy when not handled carefully and intentionally. This technique seems sloppy in some places because the color application seems arbitrary in them. Nezumi's shirt and Shion's pants look good, with bright blue on the tops of folds and red-browns on the inner shadows, using a cool/warm highlighting scheme that reads as intentional. But in places like Nezumi's pants, where both the blue and red are mixed in on the undersides of the pants, it becomes confusing, and flattens out areas what should have more volume.
The sculpting on Shion's body also seems awkward, probably because each muscle seems to be defined equally evenly, making him look "painted on" instad of like a rendered object in three dimensions.
A few areas come off as flat otherwise (like the stack of books Cravate is standing on) which I think can be rectified by, again, more intentional lighting.
Don't be tempted to throw those bright blues everywhere. before applying them, ask yourself "Is this contributing to the form, or is it just decoration?"
Concept: The concept for this piece is absolutely perfect, with Nezumi's face reading affection and Shion's mind clearly wandering as fantastic clouds spread out above them. It's a great feat to draw a believable indoor space, and you nailed that. It's warm and seems to embrace them, and the angle pulls us into their space.
Overall, absolutely fabulous with a few elements of technique that can be honed. Amazingly ambitious and fantastically rich in emotion, concept and color!
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mecengineer [2018-12-23 09:51:30 +0000 UTC]
fantastic
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NoNeedToBreed [2013-10-10 15:39:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh my. You´re a true artist! I was literally gaping when I saw it. amazing <3
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kyubicully [2012-08-29 16:13:17 +0000 UTC]
i loved this anime it was brilliant
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laycass [2012-08-20 15:54:18 +0000 UTC]
it's so awesome, fantastic work!
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jassia-chan [2012-05-25 18:51:42 +0000 UTC]
this picture is wonderful *-*
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AngelaLeonetti [2012-05-05 03:34:44 +0000 UTC]
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Kuma1692 [2012-03-26 04:30:58 +0000 UTC]
so cool keep up the good work
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yukimie [2012-01-11 00:04:49 +0000 UTC]
there the prfect yaoi cople
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Nowaki-Star [2011-12-22 02:27:29 +0000 UTC]
Wow! This is beautiful!
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Schn3e [2011-12-20 20:57:08 +0000 UTC]
Lol, I just saw that YOU'RE A LITTLE CHRISTMAS BABY ! : D
anyways xD loove those little mousieees <3 andd i'm gonna steal yar talent >: D
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Nijicx [2011-12-06 14:04:47 +0000 UTC]
I love this ani and this pic is just beautiful! It captures them both perfectly!
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SionxNezumi23 [2011-11-27 03:06:18 +0000 UTC]
oh dear God. this is amazing.
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DarkTonic [2011-11-05 15:42:02 +0000 UTC]
WOW! JUST WOW!
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noritenshi [2011-11-04 08:25:53 +0000 UTC]
wow.
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RosarioCiel [2011-11-01 22:26:24 +0000 UTC]
+ = i love this!!!!!!
yeah im awesome at math
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Dovetale-May [2011-11-01 22:06:21 +0000 UTC]
GAHH I cannot tell you how much I love this!!!! Instant fave ~
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Bunny-chan25 [2011-11-01 18:06:47 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing!! the coloring is great! just everything about it is so amazing! this should be in a huge art gallery some where :3
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sylwiaiiwo [2011-11-01 17:32:57 +0000 UTC]
omg omg omg amazing
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sylwiaiiwo In reply to Futago-KawaiI [2011-11-01 18:11:33 +0000 UTC]
ur welcome
I watched your all gallery every I can say is WOW just awesome
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chan-Tsuru-chan [2011-10-30 08:08:33 +0000 UTC]
my god - YOU ARE GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hotarubi-Kyoshi [2011-10-24 08:31:07 +0000 UTC]
блин, как вас на фон то прет?
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Futago-KawaiI In reply to Hotarubi-Kyoshi [2011-11-01 18:03:53 +0000 UTC]
хаха ну не знай, что-то вот так вот) нравится атмосферу создавать))))
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Nika-sugarCandy [2011-10-23 15:07:52 +0000 UTC]
Сион и Крыс *ОООО* ммм...они просто прекрассны =3
покрас замечательный *о* столько мелких деталей опупеть О____о
у вас просто замечательные арты !!! *сохраняет*=3
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Futago-KawaiI In reply to Nika-sugarCandy [2011-11-01 18:03:03 +0000 UTC]
ооооууу спасибо!!! блин такие приятные слова, аж неудобно
спасибо еще раз!!
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Wolf-y [2011-10-22 17:47:29 +0000 UTC]
Woooow, your art is great! ^^
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KarinaThistle [2011-10-22 13:58:49 +0000 UTC]
такие милые мышки)) потрясающая работа!
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Futago-KawaiI In reply to KarinaThistle [2011-10-23 09:22:40 +0000 UTC]
на самом деле это роботы)))))))))))) спасибо большое!!!
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