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Fluffy-fez [2017-11-04 22:49:20 +0000 UTC]
Hey I'm from , and I quite like this piece.
Overall, this isn't a bad piece. Actually, I'd say the only thing that needs to be heavily improved in this piece is the face and some minor shading and lineart stuff.
As far as the face goes, the emotion is extremely bland as well as the facial features of the character. Personally, I'd suggest not doing cube-ish eyes for the character you're trying to portray. I understand if you want to make them more slanty like it is in anime, but your eyes frankly feel like boxes, and it doesn't convey emotion or form well. This is usually because when a person is at a 3/4 angle, their eye is foreshortened and frankly, you just didn't achieve that. Example of a person doing cube-ish eyes and pulling it off: i.ytimg.com/vi/-utTA-UBTbM/hqd…
As for the emotions thing, that's conveyed throughout the entire face. For a piece that feels like it's in a fantasy setting, she seems oddly uninterested in everything. I get making a character look peaceful or badass, but again you didn't pull it off. Which, for anime isn't a terribly difficult thing to do. Mostly if you had changed the eyes to be more slanty and maybe changed the mouth, it would've come out looking better. I'd suggest looking at tutorials for emotion, here's why I personally learned, but I'd suggest finding some other one's fo anime specifically: www.youtube.com/watch?v=zVrw24…
As for the shading and lineart, I feel the shading is being held back by your lineart. No offense, but in this piece your lineart is pretty messy. Maybe you could work with thicker lines or something, but I can see in the face and hair alone that you went over the same line several times and it just doesn't look very definite. Granted, I've seen this in some mangas/animes and the style works in those because of the shading style/colors, however here I don't feel it does. It's not that the colors or the character is bad, I just don't feel it works with this specific style.
Again, this is not a bad piece in the least. Remember, that this is just my opinion, and I hope to see some more of your work in ProjectComment soon, hope you have a wonderful day
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Fyoriosity In reply to Thecat66666 [2017-10-29 23:58:38 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the character felt like a bit of a "sad" character to me with a lot of fight,
but to be honest, I had a bit of problems with the face XD
Do you know the feeling when you draw like, one eye and think "yeah that's great!"
draw the other one and think "great too!" and then both together look kinda weird?
It took me like 11 tries and then I just stuck with this but pssssssht no one needs to know XD
Thank you so much for the comment!
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MelsSketchdump [2017-10-29 21:37:36 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is amazing!
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crystalmonsterBATIM [2017-10-27 14:00:44 +0000 UTC]
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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NeoNimbus526 [2017-10-25 17:10:14 +0000 UTC]
This looks so wonderful. I really like what you've done with the petals.
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NeoNimbus526 In reply to Fyoriosity [2017-10-26 13:09:58 +0000 UTC]
You're very much welcome and I agree, it does add more depths into one picture.
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Furrofox [2017-10-25 15:29:47 +0000 UTC]
that looks awesome with the coloring. shiny ^.^b
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AmarantaYuuki [2017-10-25 15:13:01 +0000 UTC]
This looks fantastic! Thank you for this beautiful piece. I will send you your adopt file momentarily. ^^
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Nomad36 [2017-10-25 14:12:52 +0000 UTC]
Looks awesome, I’m sure she’ll love it.
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Fyoriosity In reply to Nomad36 [2017-10-25 14:13:23 +0000 UTC]
I really hope so ^.^' Thank you very much!!!
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