Bigou [2015-02-28 15:22:48 +0000 UTC]
Again, this chapter is plagued with the
same default that the previous ones: It's just a solid wall of text, without
any spacing between its paragraphs.
It's sad, since the only thing that prevented to read the first chapter to it's end is its "wall of text" aspect. If it wasn't for this, I would have it integrally, then followed by the next, and the next, and… Well, you get the picture. No?
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ssjsuzy [2014-05-24 01:01:32 +0000 UTC]
left me hanging, can"t wait for the next chapter. how do you come up with this stuff ?
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G61 In reply to ssjsuzy [2014-05-24 12:52:06 +0000 UTC]
Well, i use to like every kind of transformation, but, as you can see, i especially love demon/succubus transformation and corruption, and i'm a fan of things like Corruption of Champions, but soon i got tired of playing it, because its story finished, and i wanted more.
So i tried to make my own story, with a lot of ideas coming in my mind, and i like that because i can add things or modify the story how i would like to do.
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