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Published: 2012-01-15 06:36:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 7737; Favourites: 103; Downloads: 89
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GSUS this took a good while, and IΒ΄m so lazy that the bgs lack of perspective haha, who cares... >:CComic adaptation of the fanfic "Under your wings" wrote by ~askesalsa
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Looks like im writing a critique again...
I loved even further how you added minimal voice in this as possible. You simply let the picture talk for themselves. The way you had drawn the point of view behind Scoot's shoulder has alway s been phenominal to me as well. Eh what else can i write?
The way Sweetie's and Applebloom's reactions differ slightly shows their view on the situation more in depth. The way that theyre draawn in the same stance also directs taht they feel a helpless pity for Scootaloo as well.
But overall, thanks for having me read this. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Heh, 5 stars on everything eh? nice, and indeed, I like to draw characters diferently, like in the show they use bases to animate the expresions and faces canΒ΄t be diferent, I take that as an adventage. Thanks for the critique.
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My god! this is so amazing! keep up teh amazing work!
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wait is scootaloo related to fluttershy, I wonder?
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I donΒ΄t think so 0.o how did you got to that conclusion?
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ok either scootaloo doesnt have any parents or they are some really important ponies and she doesnt want anypony to think that she needs special treatment because of it
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T-T poor scoot, I'm desperate to see the rest of the story. awesome work
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Aw :c
well I think Scoot's expressions are my favorite in this one; that or the bird in the second last panel 
Looks like there's a scene change for what's coming up next. Interesting...
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Yep! glad u liked 
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It's alright so far.
so keep it up!
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Allright is not enough!
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moreeee moreeeeeeee moreeeeee! omnomnomnom!
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Everytime I read one of these I start to sing Spread your wings. Every single time.
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Link to tha song plz.
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Oh Queen... I should had known... <.< now I feel stupid about not knowing lol. ITS QUEEN!
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My heart has been ripped into two halves!
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Sweet a new chapter! Sweetie Belle and Applebloom seemed a little more numbstruck than I had originally planned, but this works well too
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Making em more numbstruck is a bad thing? XD Cuz since they are just kids I guessed they would look scared.
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No, it's good
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Even your filler pages are amazing! Wait, did Scoots just run off into the Everfree Forest?! Don't go in there!
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