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tp32 [2020-09-11 23:47:21 +0000 UTC]
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Paradox24 [2019-01-31 22:31:13 +0000 UTC]
This was lovely. I came in looking for general smut and ended up staying for a well written short story.
Thank you for your hard work.
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Imperial-Radiance [2019-01-31 20:11:31 +0000 UTC]
There's nothing like a lovers' quarrel with a tinge of death attached!
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GalacticNyx In reply to Imperial-Radiance [2019-01-31 20:48:17 +0000 UTC]
Some couples yell and fight; others cause massive amounts of damage and mayhem
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ElAmanteMenguante [2019-01-31 15:39:35 +0000 UTC]
Aelius spared Laelia because he believes he deserves to be judged and scorned by her for the rest of their lives, and in this she will disappoint him. That is, until the entity appears to Laelia and promises to give her the power to help Aelius find peace...
I was all ready to believe in a lovey-dovey story from Nyx. Hand-washing a tiny lady is my kinda foreplay (and afterplay). This was an intimate story, but there was enough detail and atmosphere to bring the big scenes to life. We glimpsed Aelius's vulnerability, but he remained a scary titan throughout.
So...landing on his thigh, Laelia isn't interested in what the state of his cock says about his nightmare? Another time, perhaps.
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AmandatheForsaken [2019-01-31 13:09:58 +0000 UTC]
I rather liked this one. o,o If it were a little longer, with a bit more gentle stuff before her realization, I'd say it'd be a 9.5 outta ten. As it is, I'll give it an 8.5/10. And I don't even like feudal-style stories, so that's something. o.o
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AmandatheForsaken In reply to GalacticNyx [2019-01-31 20:06:54 +0000 UTC]
With a series, you get more than one attempt to try and perfect it. It's what I like about it. Having someone look over it before you post is also useful for that.
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