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Published: 2009-06-20 15:43:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 707; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Well, here we go, i told a few people about a new drawing i was doing, i was just laying off on releasing it sooner
so here we go, a slight redesign of the anthro form i use, just a shorter snout lol.
also, her tied-up hair is shorter, and I'm very satisfied with her proportions!
please leave some constructive comments on what you think please!
, what do you think?
thank you all very much!
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Okay, had the hand changed, referenced from 's art [link] , i need to thank the artist, seriously
yeah that's all, i'm becoming increasing frustrated with my art, but i've learnt a lot about anatomy so far
her waist is a little thinner as well.
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the former, of course, i'm not that good
wait, is that art theft lol?
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Uh yeah sorta. You have to post it somewhere in the artist comments that you refferenced from his/hers o:
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eh, didn't i do that? or do i have to show the name too? o_0 eh oh. :3
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xD When I first saw it and read the artist comments I didn't see it xD But showing the name would be good too~
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whoops, i guess i hould go add it.....
there, done!
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Noice work mate!
Getting better and better now with those feminine traits, dude ^^ Keep it up!
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haha thanks a lot!i was really worried that after the edit, she was even more screwed up, i guess it's fine now.
i'm like that, pessimistic
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Nah, it is really getting better and better, and the hips are growing wider and wider
Dont be that... or I... I'll shoot you!
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You're welcome mate...
Good, that's how I like it!
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now i have to be all optimistic and all that.......bleah
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IF YA DONT, YA CANT HAVE ANY PUDDING!!!
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huh, i like ice cream more, anyway
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haha well you're a simple commenter
well thanks for taking a look anyway, i really appreciate it!
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yeah lovely curves!
i was so scared i had made it worse!
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hehee yep the are lovely
nope you did an awesome job
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yay!
haha thank you SO much!
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haha thanks, and your new ID's making you look really good there, haha!
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lol thanks,glad to know im not as ugly as i think i am
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o come on! does everyone in this world think they're ugly!?
haha, i'm just saying, but don't beat down yourself like that
just as a good friend, i would say you definitely look beautiful in your own right, because no one needs to compare looks at all haha!
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naw not everyone thinks there ugly.
lol,yeah im not allowed to say im ugly or fat anymore cuz it upsets my boyfriend,and i promised him i would say it again
that is true,everyone has something beautiful about them
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well, lot's of people are very negative
haha lol, i guess you have someone who loves you a lot, that's great!
yeap, mostly on the inside.
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lol im only negative about myself
mhmm im really lucky to have my boyfriend,hes the best
hehee yep i think if i have beauty its on the inside XD
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that's probably a given for negative ppl
haha i guess you are
yeah, everyone does!
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haha thanks a lot, i was worried i had actually screwed it up further! ^^
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Not at all! I love the details, plus I love how you made her a little curvier! ^^
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yay! it's good to know she's lookin' good now!
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This is GREAT!
She has a wonderful pose and her hands are drawn well!
Great work!!
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wow, you took awhile to see it haha, i actually updated it once already
well, thanks a lot, well, is there anything you think can be improved on? please do tell me!
and thankies a lot again, FunkyKit!
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Wow, I did?
Hmm, I don't think anything need to be improved on, it seems fine!
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i can't blame you, deviantArtists are busy people, haha!
haha thank you so much, better go and get to work before my hols end! D:
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you're welcome!
Aww work sux ><
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haha yeah it does, it really does
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she looks pretty different, i like the new design, i have a thing for ponytails, lol! She has a very attractive pair of eyes, though her muzzle is actually looking more like a fox than a were-wolf, but thats up to you, personally like foxes a little bit more than wolves
Okay now for critiques. For starters, as everyone above has mentioned are her arms. if you can fix the arm holding the backpack strap then you won't have to worry about the hands. but by fixing the arms, you'll have to adjust the shoulders a little to make it look a bit more natural, her shoulders right now even look kinda stiff. Going down the body the crotch is too high up, it should be one head lower than the belly button. next are the very long thighs but very tiny legs. 2 heads for the thighs and 2 heads for the legs. and back up her collar bone is noticeably awkward, the one heading towards the bent arm is going up towards her mid shoulder when it should be pointing towards the end of the shoulder, really easy fix. everything else is your style so i'll just leave it at that, Lovely picture still! i see major improvements :3
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haha thanks so much for the encouraging words; well, that's not too apparent 0_o
haha yeah i love her eyes too!
well, as long as no fox fur pattern is there, i think people will still assume she's a wolfy.
wow, that's a lot to swallow, okay, i know the bag holding arm has a problem, i can't pinpoint how to make it better, though; any pointers?
simple, i just need to move the belly button up by a bit, that would do the trick, the rest of the proportions based on the belly button should still fit right.
yeah, solved the legs too, just made them larger so it looks like they end lower down outside the picture
well, thanks for the great comment!
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Its okay :3 i enjoy helping. I can't wait to see this beauty colored! I've seen the edited pic, looks good not much to say about it other than how much i admire it! keep up the great work :3
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haha thank you so much! i was worried i made it worse after editing it
i will try my best to get to editing it, i really hate my school work
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I like this re-desing.She loks even better
V-monSk approves!
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haha thanks a lot, mate!
is there anything to improve on here? :3
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umm, some things need improve, bu it's just minor things
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