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archelyxs [2010-03-23 00:31:27 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing!
It took my breath away three times.
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gallymont In reply to archelyxs [2010-03-28 08:00:17 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou so much, you're very kind to my drivel.
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k-kipper [2010-03-16 05:01:58 +0000 UTC]
its wonderfull. if you were going to add things to it, the ending seems like an ending. maybe put more in the middle or the start?
although i think its lovely the way it is.. (: pretty writing <3
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gallymont In reply to k-kipper [2010-03-22 03:02:56 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I added more to the end, but I'm thinking I agree with you now. I have been writing it from some experiences and thoughts and as such it's really incomplete until I live it.
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