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Published: 2010-03-15 09:52:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description [I]
days of disgrace;; secondsofdragonflies,
an HOUR in YOUR emaciated blondearms
a rustic(forlorn)hope;;for we can only live
in fortnights accompanied the full suit
broken linguistics of Autumnleaves with
deadly secrets to tell...
                             I'll watch your eyes/
painfully plan to predict/fuck this flirtation
up,,americanisations with DCquotation
and a FAIL mark. Duration of my emanc-
ipation is unecessary-unerving-anexity
riddled, like she said;
                           'i'm only ever ham-
                            mered when i sp-
                            eak to you'

[II]
... only evident in the transmutation of senseless intoxication; an epicthreesyllabic)) -
   i'm a weetinybit in aweofyou;
   every piece of mental arithmetic,
   
      /and there are still arching fireworks in your eyes,
       exploding violets; glitter & trauma, my achingscreaming mediocrity

:i can't sleep without seeing your smile
                                         (i haven't slept
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Comments: 6

archelyxs [2010-03-23 00:31:27 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing!
It took my breath away three times.

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gallymont In reply to archelyxs [2010-03-28 08:00:17 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou so much, you're very kind to my drivel.

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archelyxs In reply to gallymont [2010-03-28 21:48:26 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome!

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k-kipper [2010-03-16 05:01:58 +0000 UTC]

its wonderfull. if you were going to add things to it, the ending seems like an ending. maybe put more in the middle or the start?
although i think its lovely the way it is.. (: pretty writing <3

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gallymont In reply to k-kipper [2010-03-22 03:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I added more to the end, but I'm thinking I agree with you now. I have been writing it from some experiences and thoughts and as such it's really incomplete until I live it.

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k-kipper In reply to gallymont [2010-03-22 05:38:22 +0000 UTC]

its pretty

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