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Gancena — Revolution 101
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FirstCaught alone.
Approached.
Should’ve asked why.
Why not ask for help?
Irony:
The one time I actually do?
No help.
Ugh.
…
…
…Months pass.
Second
Smooth operation.
Went through the normal door.
Damn!
He waits
Like a hunter by a pit trap.
Should keep walking…
But ingrained behavior says otherwise.
(Hated for 3 years and counting.)
He asks my name.
I scramble for a false one.
Irony:
My delay saves me.
He doesn’t know my name.
…But etchings go on an index card.
Fear:
Did he recognize me?
What did he write on that index card?
…
…
…Seconds pass.
Third?
Ask why!
Make a break for it!
Start a scene!
See if he gives chase,
If molehills do become mountains,
And not just for me.
After all, he doesn’t know my name.
(Right?)
Keep this plan,
And if it’s used,
You’ve passed.
Revolution 101
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Comments: 7
Very nice.
Though, I'm not going to lie, I thought this was a love poem of sorts at first.
Or tis my interpretation.
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Really? How interesting. What gave you that impression?
What's your full interpretation?
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Or perhaps the opposite, the fear of someone who loves you... who keeps catching you.
It's difficult to explain XD
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Ohhhh, I see. Clever. XD Anyone who didn't know the true origin of the poem could think that.
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