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playing around in truespace.I'm not happy with the blossom in the center. It doesn't look real at all and it's supposed to be the eye-catcher.
any comments and tips how to make this image better are greatly appreciated. thanks for looking!
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Comments: 16
Wonderful. I thought it was a photo. ^.^
My suggestion: The outline of the flower in the center is too stark. WHen you look at a line in a photo the line will blend itself slighty with what is around it.
Hope that helps.
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thank you for the comment and constrictive criticism. much appreciated!
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ich find nicht dass es unrealistisch wirkt... ich finde es total schΓΆn... *trΓ€ um*
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Very beautiful piece. I love the composition and the colour contrast. For me the flower in the middle looks good, it's what caught my eye 
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beautiful, i love the contrast and how you placed the lilly..
amazing piece.
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How about raising the flower higher in the frame? Giving it a pyramid composition.
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Bin ich denn total verblΓΆdet? Ich HABE schon ein Comment geschrieben....naja, waren nur wenige, dafΓΌr aber um so zutreffendere Worte: Simply amazing!!!
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i'm amazed by this perspective/composition. u've digitally created this depth of field - impressive! I mean, i think that the flower doesn't look really true, it'S a 3d-pic, but nonetheless i love the way it looks. U set the focus on this flower, facing towards us, it's the center of attraction , and i've no clue how u could improve the Effect - for me it worked quite well
wonderful pic, and don't say that ur bw-faces have no expression !! this is no face of course, but it owns great potetnial of expression - believe me
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impressive! no matter how the flower is faceted/texturized (or maybe it's just wilt ?
so stylish... (i hope my 3dsmax can make such 'depth of field' effects too)
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Wow, this is so tylish - reminds me somehow of "artdeco"!
exellent work!
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Beautiful work. I
lilies.
The B&W gives this a very classic look. New
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wow, really great shot. i think the texture and/or faceting on the petals reads to strongly, and make the stamen confusing. i think just lightening that area will help
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good stuff, but the inside of the flower is really wierd, i don't know if it's texturing or faceting. mainly the face of the flower reads to strong, so the stamen are difficult to read. othere than that it's absolutely phenomenal
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tis cool don't no why your complaining but i do see how it doesn't look real but still effective...fell free to look at my work and comment on it hehehehe
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try to get it the same texture as the silver things (pots?) in the background, itll unify the images, unless, or at least do the edges, leaving the centre sharpe as it is, so the flower isnt completely brought back from the foreground.
overall pretty nice
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