Comments: 8
snapdragon12 [2011-03-29 05:41:22 +0000 UTC]
Well there is only one thing i would work on here, namely the story length, you're rushing straight into the story without giving time for your characters to develop
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mw2arbiter [2011-02-18 23:07:14 +0000 UTC]
nice charlie
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Digimon4eva In reply to Garon642 [2010-12-01 04:10:33 +0000 UTC]
no problem, i'll be putting you on my watch for the next bit
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