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Gassevelle — Different future
Published: 2008-05-16 05:39:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 41; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Pain doesn’t come alone.I don’t care of anything else anymore.
I don’t see anything at all.
For the tears I cry.
Why would I care,
That waht is in front of me.
When i’ve lost it all.
When i rise up you cannot stop.
Like it would matter.
When i wake up and open my eyes.
I’ve lost my dearly love.
How could I response
to your words?
Yeah wow wow wow
Yeah yeah.
Is this the future we want?
If i hurt myself would you care?
Is this the future you wished for?
wow wow wow…
yeah..
Is this the future we are living?
Or not?
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Comments: 2
I am?
This one puts a knot in my stomach when reading. Each line is harder and harder to read.
The yeah wow wow sounds a bit like someone is celebrating and rejoicing though, not at all fitting to the rest of the poem. (Maybe there is singing of sad sounds that you spelled with these words?)
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Well working on the compose ^^
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