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Published: 2008-05-13 17:33:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 29; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description I feel lonely even you are close.
I feel hatred even I am calm.
I don’t feel anything when you are away.
Miles away..

*Please somebody…
Open my rusty gate.
And let the love come in.
Into my heart.
And break the chains
Of rusty gate.

Don’t leave me astray.
Don’t leave me alone.
I hate you more than anything.
You used me..
Raped me…

My heart is cold because of you.
My head is aching for you.

*(repeat)

Please somebody.
Help that boy.
Why don’t you care.
Are you too blind to see?
I’m sad…

You are raping me, on my bed.
You are judging me for the tears I cry.

*(repeat)

Help me to open my rusty gate
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Comments: 8

Ratafluke [2008-05-25 22:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Gripping lyrics. Pretty emotional. Sounds like something of a borderline relationship: can't be happy with you, can't be happy without you.
I feel that detail "on my bed" makes the "raping me" even more shocking.
Sounds like such a desperate cry to be helped, to be reached...

BTW Would you like some correction to make the English a little smoother?

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Gassevelle In reply to Ratafluke [2008-05-26 04:43:36 +0000 UTC]

Yes that would be welcomed.... But my computer is little shitty to do corrections. SO my friend will do those ^^

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Ratafluke In reply to Gassevelle [2008-07-08 13:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Arghs, now I find all those old comments which had been pushed from view by newer ones... Here the promised suggestions:

And break the chains
Of my rusty gate.

Don’t lead me astray.
Don’t leave me alone.
And another one, the original is grammatically correct, but I feel it flows smoother if you add the "though":

I feel lonely even you are close.
I feel hatred even though I am calm.

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Gassevelle In reply to Ratafluke [2008-07-09 18:58:39 +0000 UTC]

Yeah i try to fix them sometime

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provokedthought [2008-05-16 04:56:57 +0000 UTC]

These are some very emotional lyrics, and I really can understand the feeling and emotion behind it. I love the chorus, and all the verses.

Don’t leave me astray.
Don’t leave me alone.
I hate you more than anything.
You used me..
Raped me…

I love this part most of all because it reminds me of Kurt Cobain in someways which is why I love it. good work

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Gassevelle In reply to provokedthought [2008-05-16 05:01:24 +0000 UTC]

Kurt cobain? i have heard that anme somewhere but now don't remember where

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provokedthought In reply to Gassevelle [2008-05-16 05:03:11 +0000 UTC]

He was th lead singer of Nirvana.

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Gassevelle In reply to provokedthought [2008-05-16 05:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Aah he i know him. thank you for reminding me ^^

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