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The story of Trixie Lulamoon and how she saved the Imperium.Oi, looks like this is gonna go over my goal of 20 pages. Sigh, Trixie's dragging her hooves getting to Ponyville.
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Golden Oaks is lost. Those books are in enemy hooves already. If fillies are volunteering to help you, you may need to sacrifice them to keep things from getting worse. Such is the way of war.
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The first three panel's, their eyes:
Panel One: "Oh, just looking at things..."
Panel Two: "HOLY CRAP WHAT?!"
Panel Three: *opera singing*
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Is there a way to free Twilight from discord? Or just please tell me that a happy ending is plan? please!
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I dunno about freeing her from Discord. That could be a very very very bad thing. She's just learning about chaos, taking away her... Teacher could be far more dangerous then breaking them up. If you wanna break up two chaos gods go right ahead.
And I'm not one for predictable endings.
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Wait, what do you mean "predictable" endings?
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Painfully obvious endings. Stereotypical endings. I'm very subtle in my machinations, I would want my endings to be a surprise.
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Do you concider happy endings obvious and stereotypical?
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Just as much as sad endings. I look at it as simply an ending. I won't let all my maneuvering with the plot tip you off to what that ending may be. Unless of course you've got an eye for it, I'm not infallible. But I will be!
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I had written a big long comment about what I think about endings, what I like and what I don't, but my iPod died before I could send it and I forgot what I typed, so I will say this, I will tell you exactly what I think of your ending, and that your ending will be a huge amount of what I think of your whole story. I hope I can predict the outcome! 
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You shan't discover it until its too late.
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Challenge accepted. I feel cocky now.
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CMC making your heart explode of cuteness since they formed
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Looks like Trixie is going to be busy teaching and also having plenty of help as well.
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Ack, I'm just one man!
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me: i know
nightstar: but i want moaaaar!!!
me: . . .
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