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Geknebelt β Damsel in a Bind
Published: 2009-07-24 00:39:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 12708; Favourites: 75; Downloads: 572
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All characters drawn as 18 year olds.REDRAWN! (As of April 26 2011) Original can be found here: [link]
You guys probably don't remember this one, but I really liked drawing it the first time, and I liked what it looked like, so I decided to redraw it. Unfortunately I wasn't able to capture the exact same expression I had gotten before, but everything else is better in my opinion--the perspective, the lighting, the anatomy, and the realism of her face. This is Rebecca, my bondage OC, who I've seriously neglected since I made her up. I'll have to post more with her eventually. (I did post a few with her in them such as '25,000 views' where I don't refer to her name). Anyway, be sure to tell me what you think!
ORIGINAL SUBMISSION DESCRIPTION
I guess I liked the way the person in my last submission looked, so here she is again.
This one has several mistakes/problems, starting with the fact that I think I might have drawn the feet a bit too big. Also the angle of the crate that she's on in contrast with the angle her legs are at doesn't quite fit, and I don't quite like the expression I used.
Please comment if you favorite this! All these faves and no comments are starting to get boring...
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i love this one XD but could be Β more evil hehe
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Yup, it's a really early version of Rebecca--before I drew her in more 'intense' situations 
What would you do to make this one more evil...?
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more humiliation? XDΒ
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Haha, yes, but in what way?
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maybe.. dress her like some animal...mermaid, Β maybe with trash?
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That sounds like it could be interesting! Maybe I'm giving too much away, but I'm planning on making something along those lines...
What do you mean about dressing her up with trash? You mean I should force her to wear garbage or something?
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Okay, maybe. That sounds like something that you should use in one of your drawings.Β
I do like the idea of her being in a sort of mermaid bondage suit, though!
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xD i know you love bondage
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Haha, what tipped you off?
I love bondage as much as you love humiliation!
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meeeeee? why do you think i love humiliation u.u? i am pure...
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Oh, sure you're pure. Pure enough to want to be stripped in public by a domme, of course
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ammm are you sure you are not cofused? u.u ehem
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I figured this was fine to talk about?
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but but i am pure...... pureeeeeee XD
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What is 'pure' anyway? The idea of purity is so superstitious.
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...You want me to describe you?
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Um, okay...
I find you adventurous and giddy, kind of like a kid, but in a good way. You like to play this sort of game with people where you go back and forth between acting "innocent" and cheeky. I'm not sure if that's because you're not really that used to putting yourself out there or if it's just part of the 'humiliation' act, but it's kind of an endearing quirk. You don't let your slight language barrier keep you from making friends online, since you're friendly and easy to talk to. I think there's a part of you that wants to put yourself out there even more, and I think it's cool that you're into these weird dares and stuff. I can relate to you on that level because I'm kind of the same way.
Um, I think that's it.Β
Why did you want me to describe you, anyway?
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Β i want to know and i am like this XD
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Why do you want to know?
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You're getting better with shading, that's for sure. But I think you're still not sure about the style - more or less manga-like. In manga anathomy can be twisted a bit, but if you're trying to make characters look much more realistic, you should work more on proper anathomy, because all the mistakes are very visible there.
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Thank you.
And you're right, I'm not quite there with anime yet. As for my style, I'm going for a cross of anime and realism. At one point I'll drop the anime entirely, but right now I'm pretty much in the middle with it. (Kinda like Death Note is drawn, sorta--obviously I'm not half as good as the artist of Death Note, but I'm just using that as an example). Anyway, the only problem anatomy-wise that I can spot is the fact that the torso isn't very big in relation to the legs, but other than that I can't see much. What other mistakes did you notice?
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No, nothing more. If you're aware of that, it's ok.
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Well, I was only aware of it after reading your comment and going back to look at it, so thanks for bringing it to my attention! : P
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Hmm, I'm not sure if it's that the feet are too big, or the ankle is just too small, but something definitely seems a bit off there.
I didn't notice until now, but the your front angle noses you draw have taken me by surprise. The style of them doesn't really fit with anime, is how I guess I'd describe it? That may not make sense though, so if it doesn't just ignore this bit please!
Still a good picture! The table and the crate's perspective are definitely not the same, but I care not! My main concern is the pretty lady, who is indeed quite pretty, and thusly I think you have done a good job.
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Well, the nose bit is simply experimentation with drawing in realsim. For now I suck at it (at least with noses in particular) but maybe I'll just post one or two more in this style and then go back to a more anime-ish style. And yeah I came here to do bondage because I thought it would be eccellent practice (I used to draw castles, landscapes and anime) and the angle prospective is something I never noticed. Thanks for the comment and especially the friendly criticisms!
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