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Saphire282 [2007-02-23 03:39:53 +0000 UTC]
Such a stupid word, Forever.
Such a stupid whore of vocabulary.
I digress as always.
Always and forever.
I think that stanza really made your poem. No one can help it... the temptation to doubt, to go bad into the darkness and change what they were. What they intended to do. Wonderfully written.
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