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simplykit19 [2014-04-17 14:52:22 +0000 UTC]
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Hi buddy, thanks for letting us critique your work, its my honor e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
watched the video and the first thing came to mind was..."why this song?" just kidding ( seriously why a wedding song e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> )
i noticed you started with the figures already drawn, i would've liked to see you start from scratch , you know a blank page. than immediately tracing.
-concept wise, its good but you can do better,i asked myself, "what are these electric things?are they connected with the characters?is it their powers?is it the background?" my suggestion is how about letting them face each other, rather than letting them face random areas, it'll add a viewers point of view like a connection idea like they could be lovers or something e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
-design, well two heads are better than none e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="60" title="Clap"/> get it hehe e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> also you can add pencil shadings for a dramatic or explosive effect e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
-all in all you did a descent job on this piece, keep up the good work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="29" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="73" title="Winner"/>
-peace and rock on!
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Gelodevs In reply to simplykit19 [2014-04-17 15:19:46 +0000 UTC]
Yep i might let you go lol
i sure will
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Boomblox5896 [2014-04-18 02:07:29 +0000 UTC]
Wunderbar!
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SkeletonLete [2014-04-18 01:42:20 +0000 UTC]
oh my~!! may i ask, are these two headshots characters of yours?
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PewdieCry-MoMoTigger [2014-04-17 19:56:38 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant! I love your artwork so much!
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fancando [2014-04-17 18:08:11 +0000 UTC]
Very well done!
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rina-battu [2014-04-17 17:31:35 +0000 UTC]
is very beautiful, I loved the illustration ... very nice movement and Bridal march is beautiful ...
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perhat [2014-04-17 16:48:06 +0000 UTC]
Although it isn't my style,i like it.I think it would look better with the facial structures being more real.
Anyway,your style is different and thats what matters the most.
The shapes are very sharp looking.That's my two cents.
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Alyrine [2014-04-17 14:23:27 +0000 UTC]
wow, awesome work. All in such a small screen!
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Treforthomas [2014-04-17 14:18:02 +0000 UTC]
amazing
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Pluvia3 [2014-04-17 13:47:55 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful *0*
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