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Gemble — The Hidden Flower

Published: 2011-01-06 00:36:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 11689; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 153
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Description "Since she was born obese, Sakura had tried every single thing imaginable to lose the pounds. Her parents had taken her to doctors, specialists, even surgeons. Nothing could be safely done though to truly solve her big problem. She was destined to be this way for the rest of her life, hiding behind a jutsu that disguised her true self. After she found it in an old scroll at the bottom of a well when she was a kid, she had practiced for months perfecting the jutsu to the point where she could spend days using it. It was the first one she had ever learned, and as a result there wasn't a jutsu after it that she couldn't handle. Still, she hated using the jutsu, she hated that she had to hide what she was.

But that wasn't the crime. Tears formed in the pits of her eyes.

The crime was that it was allowed. That she was so weak and so spineless that she'd hide herself behind magic, smoke, and mirrors. That she let the words of others get to her. That she'd conform like every other coward.

The crime was that she let the fake reflection take control and be her face for the world, while the world remained unaware of the hidden flower beneath the skin. She was wearing a mask, and nothing more. And she hated herself, so much. So fucking much."

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To those expecting a funny comic, I'm truly sorry.

So yes, this is what I've been working on for the past few days. Its based on a story me and Benji have been working on together at Writing.com (Check it out here: [link] ). It's about an overweight Sakura struggling to hide behind a jutsu so that her teammates don't discover her large problem. But I don't want to spoil much here.

Yeah, this is a serious comic. And yeah, it isn't all that great. I ran into a lot of problems while doing it, and I freaking hate paint. I PROMISE if I ever do more doodles they'll be done in Photoshop. Hopefully that would make this look at least a little more attractive. Still, I felt that the issue addressed is something we can all relate to, Acceptance. How difficult it is to fit in and how much we just hide behind a literal mask. I tried to convey that through the drawings, did I succeed? You tell me.

Plus I had enough fun doing and learned a few things on the way.

Thanks for your support, give the story a read if you get the chance. Its no where near finished but we should be regularly updating it.
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Comments: 23

FlyBird6199 [2015-01-24 20:29:22 +0000 UTC]

LOL!

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bumblebeeman101 [2013-04-28 13:44:18 +0000 UTC]

no offense but dear god lighten up, its just a weight gain comic.

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SHADOWLOUIX [2011-12-27 02:04:54 +0000 UTC]

i wihs i can marier her ievn van she is fat Sakura look sexy as she is to me

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Gemble In reply to SHADOWLOUIX [2011-12-27 03:41:02 +0000 UTC]

...Um...The important thing is you tried son.

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SHADOWLOUIX In reply to Gemble [2011-12-27 09:35:26 +0000 UTC]

oh sorry or tahk you

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Gemble In reply to SHADOWLOUIX [2011-12-27 16:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Eh, don't worry about anything.

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SHADOWLOUIX In reply to Gemble [2011-12-27 16:47:26 +0000 UTC]

tahk but she look sexy as fat<3 i love it

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Gemble In reply to SHADOWLOUIX [2011-12-27 16:58:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, glad you enjoy it.

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marioman55 [2011-05-17 04:21:04 +0000 UTC]

it's ok my friend. i always like the way you are.

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680000 [2011-01-09 16:48:59 +0000 UTC]

Thats funny ?

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Gemble In reply to 680000 [2011-01-10 02:02:43 +0000 UTC]

What?

No, I said that the comic is a serious comic and ISN'T funny.

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680000 In reply to Gemble [2011-01-10 02:51:49 +0000 UTC]

My bad !

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Gemble In reply to 680000 [2011-01-10 02:57:47 +0000 UTC]

Heh, it's fine. I guess I kind of switched my words around in the description.

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Barkis1 [2011-01-07 04:40:36 +0000 UTC]

The world is cruel!
But some of us like BBWs!

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Gemble In reply to Barkis1 [2011-01-07 06:28:16 +0000 UTC]

Alas! Woe! Agony! Woe!

Of course some of us do, but then again there's no real lesson to the comic if I said that...

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Barkis1 In reply to Gemble [2011-01-08 03:46:14 +0000 UTC]

Sadly true.

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interpk [2011-01-06 17:08:46 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully she meets someone to fall in love with who likes her big...

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Gemble In reply to interpk [2011-01-06 17:20:13 +0000 UTC]

Heh, we'll see. Did you read the story? We're going to be working on it over time, we're just taking a short break from it.

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Roxin-dreamer [2011-01-06 02:52:09 +0000 UTC]

:c Poor Sakura. That kind of explains why she's so short-tempered.

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Gemble In reply to Roxin-dreamer [2011-01-06 03:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah sorry the comic isn't exactly happy cheery material.

Thanks for the comment though.

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Roxin-dreamer In reply to Gemble [2011-01-06 03:08:59 +0000 UTC]

^_~

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overlordofnobodies [2011-01-06 00:42:12 +0000 UTC]

I seen this. It was a little new to me(Most weight gain fic I read are more fun.) but it is well writing. Nice work on both.

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Gemble In reply to overlordofnobodies [2011-01-06 00:45:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it, there should be more to come once we work out a few things and plan.

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