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GemiDonnie โ€” Gardenia 7
Published: 2010-02-07 21:48:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1377; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 7
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Description For Diffy, a very late birthday present!
Warnings: Slash, incest, turtlecest.
Pairing: Raph/Don.
Summary: He hated it.


The words just blurted out, like frozen glass pieces. Sharp, cutting his tongue.

He could almost taste the blood.

And Raph had stared at him.

Those golden eyes, wide, shocked, angry?

No, not angry.


Scared.


That was what they had been.

Donatello had only felt bitterness then: he had been right, after all, Raph had become interested in someone. Just like April had become interested in Casey.

He had yelled.

Told Raph that yes, he knew.

He knew everything and that if Raph wouldn't cut it out, he might tell Leo.
That he was putting the family in danger, more than he had ever done before.


Raphael had looked so scared.


And for once, just like he had for once yelled at a brother, Raph hadn't responded with anger like he should've, because Don knew he had been unfair.

Hadn't thrown even more things (what a mess his room had turned into) and hadn't punched him.

Instead, Raph ran away.

Hadn't even slammed the door shut, only leaving it open, and there had been no one to stop him. Splinter was out with Leo and Mikey, picking up things at April's, and Donnie's throat had been too tight to yell.

His lungs had felt as if they had been filled with icy water.

He buried his face in his hands, and didn't pay attention to the sick flowers touching his toes, half hidden by the dirt.

He had hurt Raph.

No matter how much his brother might've denied it, he knew he had.

Had scared and hurt and made him run away.

Because he had lied about those flowers, not willing to say that he had gotten them by himself, and suddenly Raph wasn't there.


He sniffled, for once not because of the cold.


And then he sank to the floor.

He wasn't the one that should be crying.


But he was, and he hated it.
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Comments: 60

Skandron [2011-05-04 08:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Wow awesome little story! Can't believe I haven't seen it til now! Talk about misunderstandings!! Raph must feel absolutely fuckin terrified and so rejected! And poor Don. He's only making things even worse!

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GemiDonnie In reply to Skandron [2011-05-04 08:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Yup. That's what the story is about; misunderstanding after misunderstanding, and things explode.

Glad you like it, despite how old it is. ^^

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IWillSacrifice [2010-08-25 23:00:40 +0000 UTC]

I swear, Donnie can easily hurt someone mentally just as much as Raph could hurt someone physically.

Please tell me you will eventually continue this at some point. This cliffhanger is killing me >.>

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GemiDonnie In reply to IWillSacrifice [2010-08-26 04:07:28 +0000 UTC]

I will, I will! Promise. It IS a present, after all. XD;

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Azuki-chan [2010-03-26 02:03:48 +0000 UTC]

Stupid Donnie D: His lie made things worse than they already were!! And now he cries because of it, and the confusion DX

Poor Raph, he feels like a sick pyscho lover, and hearing he has been found out and, probably (because he pics things in his mind wrong) rejected, it just too much even for him

Ahhh, the sadness!! the angst!! Is painful, but this is turning out great!!

It's sweetly addicting :3

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GemiDonnie In reply to Azuki-chan [2010-03-26 05:28:20 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so. X3

And thanks for reading!

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Azuki-chan In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-03-26 11:05:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!! :3

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Arriscas [2010-02-09 01:28:06 +0000 UTC]

I really love this series you got going on. I feel so bad for both Donnie and Raph... T__T Why did Donnie have to lie to Raph? Now Raph thinks he knows when he really doesn't know anything...
Hope to see more of this soon. ^^

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GemiDonnie In reply to Arriscas [2010-02-09 05:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Donnie tried to protect his tiny macho-image. And remember, Donnie thinks he knows too, when he doesn't. :3

Thank you!

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Arriscas In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-09 14:27:49 +0000 UTC]

Haha, 'tiny macho-image'...
But I still think it was so stupid of him. >.< I hope things get solved soon or I'm afraid Raph will do something stupid.
What a hell of a misunderstanding! @.@

No prob!

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GemiDonnie In reply to Arriscas [2010-02-09 17:07:38 +0000 UTC]

Well, it is. XD

Hopefully, yes. We will have to see! Or, well. You will have to see. 8D *evil giggles*

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Arriscas In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-09 21:12:08 +0000 UTC]

You're evil, you know that? XD
*sticks out tongue*

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GemiDonnie In reply to Arriscas [2010-02-10 05:37:11 +0000 UTC]

I had no idea.

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LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-08 21:17:11 +0000 UTC]

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-09 05:35:43 +0000 UTC]

O_O

*inches away*

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-09 07:06:01 +0000 UTC]

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-09 16:55:43 +0000 UTC]

X3

So. Likey?

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-10 01:00:27 +0000 UTC]

Um, chya! This is awesome! I can't wait to see what happens! Really. I can't wait. Every second I go without the next chapter I die a little more.

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-10 05:38:41 +0000 UTC]

That won't get the chapter written faster. :3 *is killed*

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-10 20:56:33 +0000 UTC]

I don't know who's killing you, because I'm already dead over here. Too many seconds without Gardenia I suppose.

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-10 20:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Ah. That might be it, yes. *nods sadly* I am so sorry. Where will the funeral be held?

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-10 21:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Tell ya what. I'll have it in Sweden, just so you can attend.

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-10 21:15:54 +0000 UTC]

So nice! 8D
Where in Sweden? Not in Stockholm, I hope. Too far away. XD

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-10 22:22:06 +0000 UTC]

Well gosh, idk. Where would be a good place for my funeral? I want to be buried somewhere pretty, so my dead body can have something nice to not see. lol

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-11 05:31:36 +0000 UTC]



Hmmmm. Oh, Bohuslรคn! I think it's pretty there. XD
All... sea and small mountains and boats and ships. 83

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-12 02:27:19 +0000 UTC]

Ooo pretty! I don't know if I've seen real mountains before...and I've only seen the ocean once.

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-12 07:36:59 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if the mountains are really mountains. But they are fun to climb.
Only ONCE!? *lives at it* O__O
HERE. Your funeral will be here! ... and Wedding. And. And. All other special stuff!

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-12 22:13:26 +0000 UTC]

lol Yeah, I'll give birth to my first child on top of one of the mountains. Yeah I live in Illinois, so I'm pretty land locked. Lake Michigan looked like the ocean to me! lol

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-12 22:22:07 +0000 UTC]

Imagine what a spirit that kid will be born with, eh? 8D
... Woah. XDD

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-12 23:23:46 +0000 UTC]

lol Yeah it would be quite the magical event. I'm sure my child would be pretty special. Meh, he/she will be pretty special anyway. Ya know. Being my kid and all. lol

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-13 07:29:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, *nodding* but if you get it here I can teach it Swedish! 8D

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-13 19:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Yep, yep. That's important.

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-13 20:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Very important. We need to spread the language! 8D

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-13 20:39:10 +0000 UTC]

I'm working on it. I'm using a site called livemocha.com where you do lessons and you can interact with people who are native speakers of the language you're learning. It's really helpful and fun. I tried to talk one of my friends into doing it with me, but I know she won't. lol

I can say stuff like Tak, Mannen ar lang (My keyboard doesn't have Swedish letters, sorry. lol), Kvinnan ar smal, Du ar gammal, Flickan ar ung, Pojken ar kort, Jag ar tjock ...stuff like that.

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-13 21:40:58 +0000 UTC]

If Tak is Thanks, then it's spelled Tack.

But it sounds awesome. XD

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-13 23:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Rats. lol

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-14 07:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Sorry Splinter. XD

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-14 18:21:43 +0000 UTC]

lol! Oops! Yeah, sorry Master Splinter. *bows*

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-14 18:30:11 +0000 UTC]

Oops indeed.
I apologize for her too, Sensei. *bows*

Splinter: Hmpf.

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to GemiDonnie [2010-02-14 18:44:07 +0000 UTC]

I am ashamed.

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GemiDonnie In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-14 18:47:11 +0000 UTC]

*pats back*
There, there. I am sure he will forgive you!

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LittleMissDifferent In reply to LittleMissDifferent [2010-02-08 21:17:59 +0000 UTC]

It's so sad. I can't wait for more!
(I just realized that sounds really evil.)

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Megan-Howl35 [2010-02-08 20:16:30 +0000 UTC]

I positively, absolutely love it! This whole story is totally something they would do. Pine for each other in silence, hoping the other will notice them.

And the angst...oh the angst! It's sad, beautiful, and so true of their characters. I can't wait for more. ^_^

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GemiDonnie In reply to Megan-Howl35 [2010-02-08 20:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Really!? X3

Thanks! I rarely feel that I get them down, but now... thanks! And glad you like it. <3

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1woof1 [2010-02-08 19:59:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh he lied, that's why I was confused.
This is heartbreaking. Please update this soon. Please!

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GemiDonnie In reply to 1woof1 [2010-02-08 20:33:18 +0000 UTC]

Sorry? XD

I will try. ^^ *evil giggles in background*

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Jordancatgirl7 [2010-02-08 04:09:33 +0000 UTC]

*twists and bites lower lip* Last one for tonight? T_T But you'll post more soon, right? Right?!? This is getting so good. Raph thinks Don knows but, for once, Don doesn't know everything.

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GemiDonnie In reply to Jordancatgirl7 [2010-02-08 05:54:18 +0000 UTC]

Maybe. 83 *is killed*

I will try to update soon. This was the reason why it took so long! I didn't want to put up cliffhangers and take forever, but I did eventually.

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BlueMoonUmbreon [2010-02-08 01:49:08 +0000 UTC]

. . . This.... Is so... SAD!
I SILL LOVE THIS! FAVING!

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GemiDonnie In reply to BlueMoonUmbreon [2010-02-08 05:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. XD

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