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Multi-Dimension [2018-10-19 14:56:09 +0000 UTC]
hi! I'm from
ayyy DanganRonpa!! I remember this character, i love her settings!!
sry sry, got carried away. *ahem*
This art is pretty good, the glass window seems to be the main focus of the art. I don't have much knowledge about stain glass and how to properly draw them, but I personally find this looking very good! The fact that she uses scissors as her murder weapons, it's very suitable to use that, and the details on the scissors are amazing! However, correct me if i'm wrong, I don't recall in the story about a gun of some sort, let along a gun over at the right. And I don't see a point of putting in a book, an ink pen, and a bottle of ink. I find it a little irrelevant to her main story. Also, having only the giant scissor with details of the glass is a little unbalance to the rest of the window glass. You could add more cracks to everything basically, and would look better if there's more scissors and pointing all towards Fukawa.
Fukawa, in general, looks great! The foldings on her skirt is impressive. Her expression is clear, and the hair flowing is pretty good! What you may need to work on is proportion. When she was standing straight, her skirt is like roughly knee-level, when she sits down, at most the skirt will only raise to her knees. You could use advantage of the skirt folds and when it comes to her thighs, make the folds point slowly together as they get near her waist. That way it can provide a better feel of her sitting posture.
I think that wraps up all the suggestions i have. Keep up the great work!!!
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Multi-Dimension In reply to GemiNight [2018-10-19 23:59:26 +0000 UTC]
Very smart choices, in that case! I didn’t play the game, I just watched the anime (Danganranpa 3).
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Rejuv1n8edChr0nic9l [2018-10-19 06:40:49 +0000 UTC]
Now I see that this is a Danganronpa pic! Glad she improved in UDG, which was what I thought Danganronpa was going to be, as well as a great game, with some sadly true messed up scenarios.
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Preston-Draws63 [2018-10-19 00:32:55 +0000 UTC]
It's mind blowing! Meaning I love it!
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MichaelRosen69 [2018-08-04 23:14:01 +0000 UTC]
I love this, it's amazing!
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