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Published: 2013-02-17 17:13:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1052; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 4
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De Flores wants a moment at the beach with Jaden Toadson while enjoying the fresh wind of the outdoors. She's brought a camera with her to have some pictures for her to remember the moments of relaxation together.Related content
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who is jaden toadson again? (sorry i forgot from my long absence)
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He's basically one of the main protagonists of my KSF series
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I think Jaden's eyes just popped. Dayumn she looks hawt.
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two things come to mind. 1: Perverted BOW-CHICKA-WOW-WOW Tucker song styled and 2. Where's the Beach? Is it a white sand beach soaked in the blood of their enemies or is a Hawaiian scene with palm trees, clear skies and water and some waves.
Heck your work and excellent.
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My suggestion is that you should use capital letters for lettering the letters in dialogue box. Capital letters make reading easier, although having the letters only in capital isn't as pretty.
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