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GentlePeace — Leave your past behind.
Published: 2013-02-22 23:39:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 6017; Favourites: 209; Downloads: 36
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I know that you remember all of those bitter momentsBut what is it worth for to keep those memories working
They’re not making you happy; they’re just making you hopeless
Then follows depression from the feelings that you’ve let lurking
Because you went through it, but you relive it every moment
When it’s all in your mind and you’re making it a necessary component
It’s just jarring to your heart, yet you keep it for your mind is uncertain
Many broken hearts, from family to friends, something you won’t admit was certain
I’ve been like you, for months to years, having a mind that’s unclear
And so I’ve shed so many tears, all which came from fear
Though it could be hard to move along, no one ever said you cannot
So please, don’t give up, I believe in you, even if you do not
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Comments: 122
True on the length, as long as the meaning gets to you.
Also, every poem that I write is a song in my head.
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You should pick up a guitar and write music to go to some of them. Itd be amazing.
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That's why I want to learn how to play guitar.
Or at least get one and teach myself...
One year I'll learn how to, eventually.
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Its not too hard, I recommend just taking like a month of lessons, just to learn all the frets and notes and scales and chords, then just teach yourself online. Thats how I did it.
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Yeah.
I'm thinking of learning how to play guitar in a year or so.
Would be nice if earlier.
But I will learn... Eventually.
Thanks for the advice.
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I needed this. A lot.
Your poems always make me happy.
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Another great piece!
Only wish I found dA two years ago, but that's in the past now. I would rather look to the future.
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Thank you.
But it would've been impossible since I've been in DA for 9 months now... Oh... I see what you did there
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Beautiful 
I used to be depressed too, but I moved on. The interesting thing about the drawing here is that I sometimes say "an Angel took my hand and walked me out of the dark."
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I think this happens to all of us, I just hope we all go through it.
Thank you and I hope that person finds happiness.
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this made me feel a whole lot better
awesomely written
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Thank you.
I'm happy I could make you feel better.
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Thank you. I needed something like this.
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So...beautiful... *sniffles* I love this so frickin' much...
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this is nice...
it's even more sad that some people never had a hand to hold through it.
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Well... Maybe in the end, they'll have someone to be happy with.
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I'll be here all week... And longer.
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It is very hard to move on sometimes and you made a piece that was understanding of how hard it can be but is also motivational in helping the reader to want to move forward. Lovely work.
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I was trying to do that
Thank you very much.
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Thank you, I'm glad this was on the front page for me to see, its such a great coincidence this is exactly what Ive been going through right now... thank you... your poem is beautiful and help me grow
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I'm happy I could help you.
I hope you get out of that hole soon.
I'm surprised it got to front page O-0
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you shouldn't be suprised that it got on the front page... this is a beautiful piece of work! you should be proud
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This is really beautiful. My past is fueled with self confidence issues and not willing to give myself a chance to move on. If there was anything I could say to my past self Im sure something like this would be on my mind. A really beautiful piece with a really awesome message
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Thank you very much and I'm glad I could touch your heart
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