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GeorgiaMaiSx — Love Me Not Her. 7
Published: 2010-09-19 09:02:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 220; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description                    After Andy and Laurynn had walked off to another room, after Laurynn picking the cigarette from the hat, I couldn't help but get jealous. I had guessed that it was no coincidence that Laurynn had picked Andy's token, I doubt it was just pure luck, but I wanted to be the one to have picked him. Before they even came back in I had decided to pick Andy's token 'coincidentally' again. I would show him who was the better sister. Suddenly I realised how much of a bitch I was being. I had no control over Andy, I couldn't make him want me. And the last thing I wanted was for someone to come in between me and Laurynn. She's my best friend, the person I'm closer to than anyone else I've ever met, and Andy was not going to ruin that. Especially not even a day after meeting him. I decided to leave it down to pure luck, to not look at what I picked from the hat, to play fair. We were all talking waiting for the other two to return, and after dead on 7 minutes they did. Laurynn looking a little flustered, blushing wildly, and Andy simply smirking.
                  "My turn" Andy declared, walking over to the hat putting his hand in. He was looking at what he was taking, cheating just like Laurynn did. I rolled my eyes, knowing he was looking for Laurynn's black iPod. I almost gasped when instead he pulled out my own red iPod.
                  "Shall we?" he suggested, raising one of his eyebrows and smirking a little. I tried to stop myself from blushing but couldn't. He held out his hand to me and pulled me up from the chair, walking me through to his bedroom, where him and Laurynn had emerged from moments before. He walked over to the bed and sat on the edge, motioning me to follow him over. Taking a deep breath I walked towards him, my stomach doing flips with every step.
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Comments: 7

MsBrandyDoll [2010-10-03 18:46:37 +0000 UTC]

...Really?
Okay, that's just...not realistic.
I think you should try to characterize Andy a bit better. Had it not been for the name, you wouldn't be able to tell that it's him if not for the name.
And I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just trying to help out with making it better.

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GeorgiaMaiSx In reply to MsBrandyDoll [2010-10-03 19:05:39 +0000 UTC]

again, i don't know Andy well as a character.. sorry :/

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MsBrandyDoll In reply to GeorgiaMaiSx [2010-10-03 19:37:50 +0000 UTC]

It would be a good idea to go and watch his vlogs and other videos he's done. Reading interviews helps, too that's how I ended up making my characterization of him.

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GeorgiaMaiSx In reply to MsBrandyDoll [2010-10-03 19:56:30 +0000 UTC]

i'll probably do that at some point. when he re-enters the story again..

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rettemich1989 [2010-09-19 19:35:42 +0000 UTC]

...........no comment

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GeorgiaMaiSx In reply to rettemich1989 [2010-09-20 18:02:17 +0000 UTC]

ahahaha xD

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rettemich1989 In reply to GeorgiaMaiSx [2010-09-20 20:50:51 +0000 UTC]

lol

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