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Published: 2017-11-28 16:16:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 462; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 7
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2017 Updated shoot. Older version can be found in this folder. My awesome beautiful, and amazing little wife let me do a photo shoot with her. Just making sure I haven't lost my touch, and know how to do things.Related content
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forgive what i'm gonna say, as fantasies differ from person to person and i hate to force mine onto others, especially mine being bizarre. Also i don't know if i should do this, as i don't want sound disrespectful to a beautiful woman and not even to her husband. So please tell me if i go too much over the limit or if you feel it's not something you like to read in here. It's just that it's my peculiar way to feel toward feminine beauty, for my crazy fantasies, the more a woman is pretty and sensual, the more i feel small. Well, let me tell that miss Tina wears gorgeously the black style, and she's crazy amazing with those spike heel boots on her long beautiful legs, in a majestic way! and the corset? it's so beautifull held, delineates perfectly her torso and then explodes in her glorious florid shape of her sensual breast, generously framed by the keyhole style of the top, and the make up, the gathered hair and the earrings give a vibe of majestic! If my crazy fantasy was real, that men were the smaller in proportion to the lady beauty, me or everyone else, there with her, would be small as one of her blue colored fingernails, unnoticed on the shiny white floor, beneath the shadow of her wonderful dangerous high heels. It would be a epic devastating and dangerous quest, getting on those thick soles, climbing the kilometric legs, walking up the belly and surpassing the vertical tower of her torso. Then it would be necessary to be a great alpinist to get to the prohibitive top of her breast, walking on their soft and precarious surface, to finally get on her earring and reach her eyes... all of this just to get her attention! will she meet the traveller's request of a talk, or will she casually flick him with a finger toward the depths of her warm beautiful cleavage? only she knows!
Sorry for the weirdness, im not quite sure i should have done this but it's one of those times in which if you dont express the thing you regret it aftermath xO
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My wife and I have been married over twenty years, and we have a very strong relationship. The trust we share is very strong, so what you said was not found to be offensive. The images are meant to stir emotions in an individual, as that is the whole purpose of art. I was a teacher of art, and I always stated that, “You may or may not like a piece of art, but you should always respect it.” Clearly you like this piece, and respect the model for her beauty. This to me is an owner that you like the piece so much, and went so far to put it in writing.
I hope you don’t mind as well, as I have some constructive input as well. You’re wording was well formulated, and made the reader understand what was being felt. The emotions, where almost palatable, and stir emotions in the reader as well. These are a good sign of a well thought, and organized writer. Some improvement could be made however.
The message would be better delivered in a professional respect if you work on you grammar however. This can be achieved if typed in a program such as Microsoft word, or other such program. This would create a much stronger message, and drive home your feelings. Simple things such as “I’s” should be in capital letters, and “im” should be spelled as “I’m.” These are just a couple examples, and as the old saying goes, “God is in the details.” i.e. details are important.
Again, this was very appreciated, and clearly well thought out. I actually enjoyed reading it. I appreciate when my work stirs such emotions, and also energizes creativity in someone else. Thank you for this, and hope to inspire you in the future.
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thanks, I'm very happy and grateful for the feedback and the appreciation! And about the grammar, well you're right, I shouldn't put myself into writing something like this at 3.30 AM. Aside that, it's true. You know, even not being from a English speaking country, I always cared for the form and took a certain pride in having put all my efforts in learning English back at school... a good amount of my grammar errors are just due to lack of attention and too fast writing (and the fact that believe it or not, many times even if re-read the text, I can't spot all the mistakes). The other errors... how to say, it's a sort of habit. Writing on Internet for years, I have ended up developing (almost unwillingly) a sort of slang that sacrifices a part of grammar for the sake of major speed and fluidity on the keyboard. And this, seen from a outer perspective, it's a quite interesting mechanism on how languages change. But still grammar error are grammar error, no excuses for that.
I still think honestly that internet language isn't wrong per se. It's a sort of technical language, as mariners use sailor speech etc...
I'm not speaking of course of cutting in pieces the words and putting random characters or "K" letters everywhere, that's terrible, but the use of some abbreviations and the emotes is legitimate, as in fact, in a certain sense a chat is Not a form of written language, like a letter is. Or a comment like this, of course. It's more like a form of written spoken dialogue, hence for example the need of a fast and easy code of signs to express the emotion you show personally when you are saying a period.
But that is for chat environments: comments, letters, and worse of all spoken language... well, there one should mind at least a bit the grammar. And as you said, in a kind of message like my one, even more. (honestly I'm not quite sure about the Word correction feature, I used to use it... and it wasn't a so great grammar help... maybe the newer versions are better?).
Well well, thanks again for the hints and glad you liked my crazy thoughts, you gave me interesting points to meditate about!
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Programs have got much better, as I have used Microsoft Word for some time. Early on it was alright, but had some flaws, but now it is much better. Still not perfect, but definitely better. Homophone words are my weakness; word that sound the same, but spelled different. Deer, dear, there, their, and To Too and two. I think they did that just to drive people like me bonkers. I agree there are many different types of spelling; such as texting, secretary short hand, chat, as well as military. As you pointed out more or less; these are not wrong but simply for those areas. In any event, glad to help out. 
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